Activity for User 217 - Dennis Hirning - dchirning@msn.com

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1 May 20 Comment Thank you for your comments. I worked mainly on trying to separate the clouds from the mountains. The blue haze didn't help much either. I do use layers and masks at times but I don't remember if I did on this or not. As far as being level, there isn't much of anything level in here. The area can get considerable wind that isn't very kind to old abandoned buildings. I had cropped off the fence that was at the bottom of the frame. I think that the guide lines will show how the posts are perpendicular and also that corners of the building are close to on the level even though the building is leaning. The posts that weren't cropped off don't appear to be leaning either. I circled what is left of a building that leaned too far. If I get back to working on this, I'll try to use your suggestions. May 28th
1 May 20 Reply The clouds and the mountains were pretty much the same tones and contrast. It tried to do some playing with them and didn't get past this. May 20th
1 May 20 Comment I agree with everyone's comments. I would especially crop off the bright branch on the right that barely shows. The other one doesn't bother me that much.
May 17th
1 May 20 Comment I think it looks great. I even the black mast on the right that might break the symmetry points to the top of your mast. May 17th
1 May 20 Comment I don't mind the tree but I wonder if it would have been possible to turn the camera a little to the left to so you could see some of the trunk? I wouldn't mind losing some of the skyline on the right. May 17th
1 May 20 Comment I agree with Neal's comments. I don't see any problem with the shadow. With the texture of the feathers there isn't a sharp shadow line and the light is coming from roughly the same direction as the light on the rock. I would crop this to a vertical with just the rock and the robin. At first glance, I missed the robin. May 17th
1 May 20 Comment I like irises but it seems like I always miss them when they are blooming. There seems to be some sort of halo effect on the edges of the bottom leaves. I don't know if this is from something done in Lightroom or not or how it could be avoided. I do like the way that the background was handled. A little more depth of field could sharpen the darker petals. May 17th
1 May 20 Comment I really like how you handled the stroke. I like all the diagonals with the branches. I might like to see the leaf on the border at the right toned down. It seems to draw too much attention. May 17th
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