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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 1 |
Jun 19 |
Comment |
I tend to agree with Stephen's suggestion about the perspective as you have it. I will try to correct sometimes such as my image this month and other times I will leave it alone. I like that you captured this during the Blue Hour instead of later when the sky would have been black. The light from a moving vehicle does tend to separate this into almost two subjects but I do like it here. |
Jun 22nd |
| 1 |
Jun 19 |
Comment |
Count me in on the comments about the out of focus area on the right. I would like to see a little more depth of field so the light object in the bottom would be in focus after cropping the right side. |
Jun 22nd |
| 1 |
Jun 19 |
Comment |
I do like the position of the bird and the background works well for you. The blank eye did bother me. It seemed like it looked like something you might see laying on a beach. Just as a side note, if you have a lot of dark area around the borders, you might add a slight grey stroke to separate your image from the black background used on the website. |
Jun 22nd |
| 1 |
Jun 19 |
Comment |
Good catch. If you had used your motor drive, you might have been able to catch the entire foot above the rock with the wings still in a similar position. |
Jun 22nd |
| 1 |
Jun 19 |
Comment |
I like the sky color. It looks natural to me but maybe it is because of where I live compared to California. I don't know if you could have zoomed in further but I would like the see the buildings and sun? as the subject. Moving to one side or the other might have given you better balance between the two. It looks like you just missed the birds flying in the correct spot. Maybe more would have come through before you lost the color. |
Jun 22nd |
| 1 |
Jun 19 |
Comment |
It looks great. I might have burning in the brighter green towards the middle of the right side. It tends to lead the eye out of the image. |
Jun 22nd |
| 1 |
Jun 19 |
Comment |
Thanks for you comment. I don't see a lot of difference between the two. Here is what I started with before I did a lot of adjustments. |
Jun 5th |
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