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C/R |
Comment |
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Image |
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May 19 |
Comment |
Very nice. The storm clouds and the lighting make the image. I was thinking that the spire was tipped a little but I think it might be an illusion from the way that the ridge on the spire is located. I check and it sees like other features are perfectly vertical. I am a little bothered by the boat at the bottom. It seems to draw too much attention away from the cathedral. If you had lots of time, you might have tried to glue the fallen leaves back on the tree.
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May 26th |
| 1 |
May 19 |
Comment |
Very nice scene. You can't complain at all about the weather. Normally, you wouldn't include just that single branch coming in on the left but it isn't that much of a distraction. Is this tilted to the right? I might try cropping off a little on the bottom to make all the trees partial since it could be a distraction if you could have included all of them on the right. |
May 26th |
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| 1 |
May 19 |
Comment |
I really like the position of the bird so you see the colors on it's back and also still see the face. I agree with the comments about the missing feet. The branch it is perching on is also interesting and I would like to see all of it with the feet. You might try cropping in closer to remove the stick and also the light area between the legs.
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May 26th |
| 1 |
May 19 |
Comment |
The color of the flowers really add a point of interest. You might consider cropping in more to make the darker trees a framing element. That would also remove the stick. The two different groups of flowers tend to lead the eye out of the image. |
May 26th |
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| 1 |
May 19 |
Comment |
It is a very appealing image. I like the way the boats are lined up to lead the eye into the image. It does look like you you did some HDR work and it left a halo in the high contrast areas such as the horizon and the sky. I might crop off some on the left. |
May 26th |
| 1 |
May 19 |
Comment |
I like the angle that you used. The flowers work as a good foreground. You might have tried a lower angle to remove the middle "stuff". I thought this didn't seem to have enough contrast. I thought it might have been from the the time of day but the shadows don't show this so it was probably just thin overcast. I wondered about bringing out the detail in the clouds a got carried away with various plugins. |
May 26th |
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| 1 |
May 19 |
Comment |
Since this was a scavenger hunt and an item was "Motion", I thought the hand motion might work better than the other one I had done before. It probably could have been a slower shutter speed to handle that better.
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May 11th |
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