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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
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Sep 17 |
Comment |
I was thinking the same thing about the balloon before I saw what you did to it. Leaving it darker would probably have helped to make it look natural. It could even have been almost a silhouette since the sun was behind it.
I think that the scene with the clouds, sun and rays is great. Do something with the balloon to really make this eye catching. |
Sep 18th |
| 1 |
Sep 17 |
Comment |
I just had to play with this a little after reading the other comments. I didn't realize just how close you were to the surf until I noticed the water splashing up under the sun.
I did try increasing the vibrancy and did some cropping as well as played with the saturation and did some dodging on the surf. |
Sep 18th |
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| 1 |
Sep 17 |
Comment |
I really like the clouds. I was thinking that you might have tried cropping off the bottom, even losing the bush that does create interest in the field. I like to see a full range on the histogram unless you have some particular reason to not have it. You could move it further to the right to increase the brightness a little. |
Sep 18th |
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| 1 |
Sep 17 |
Comment |
Hey, if it is a Deli and Pizza place, I would eat there. I don't care what is on their building. Well, I did have an antipasto pizza at a place and I don't think I will bother going back there again. It much have been 1/4" thick all over the pizza.
I do think that you presented your subject well in this image. |
Sep 18th |
| 1 |
Sep 17 |
Comment |
I learned something with this. I always called it milkweed when I was a kid. I think that I have seen some of this in the field behind my house. This would be something interesting to play with. I do agree that a greater depth of field would help. You might try spraying some water on it to add even more interest. Maybe try positioning this a little more off center. |
Sep 18th |
| 1 |
Sep 17 |
Comment |
It looks good to me. It's always good to have a good foreground for sunsets. I agree that I didn't notice the birds until I read the title. I don't know if it makes much difference if they were birds or leaves. In fact, with the title, maybe they should have been more noticeable in the image. Maybe a vertical or square format with just the tree on the right? |
Sep 18th |
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