Activity for User 201 - Paul Hoffman - PHof929403@aol.com

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33 Nov 17 Comment I think you have a pleasing composition that is not a wow composition. I find the image is about a stop to a stop and half over exposed and I think your F5 is a tad shallow for this image. I personally would like a touch of room on the right of the tree so it self standing as at the moment it being supported by the edge of the picture. Silly question as I gust you would have fallen 2000 feet to your death, but did you take a picture moving 4 to 5 feet to the right so you get the tree and the mountain with the colour on it separated? I do think with some luminosity mask would bring the detail and colour out in this picture. Nov 19th
33 Nov 17 Comment Sorry to say that I am not a fan of this. the sky dominates the image and nothing is in focus. For me I think you missed the image by getting lower to ground level and using the lines of the graves with that great sky as a great background. Taking in IR is a good idea but more care on the taking is needed. Nov 19th
33 Nov 17 Comment This has a lovely feel of tranquility and is right up my street, Your shutter speed is very nice to give this silky smooth sea and the blue tones are great. There area couple of little spots I am worried about that I marked in red on the picture below. Two spots in the sky that don't look right, small spots on the right hand side of the mountains and the left hand edge of the main peak does have some fringing. Otherwise this will makes a great print. Nov 19th
33 Nov 17 Reply Larry are you left handed? Nov 19th
33 Nov 17 Comment The other two have cover the qualities of the colours and everything like that and have said this is a great picture. However this is meant to be honest feedback and I think you have got some problems with you manipulations with the image. If you look at the trees on the right side we look like we have a giant spiders web where you have done some selection and it has not selected correctly. On the left I am not sure if that softening/miss is real or your working that has not worked. But it has not worked. Sorry but I think this I would try this again. The new select and mask in PS is very good now. Nov 19th
33 Nov 17 Comment This is a pleasing landscape and you have composed it well with the interest dominating the right hand side and that lovely delicate fell of the mountains in the background. There is slight fringing on the edge of the mountains that could be easily solved with the clone tool. However I do find that head of land on the left very heavy to the eye and as most human brains work left to right its does dominate the image for me. I think bring a touch more detail out would soften the heaviness. Nov 19th
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