Activity for User 201 - Paul Hoffman - PHof929403@aol.com

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33 Apr 17 Comment I love the name of the building with all that urban scribble on the side. You say you did a crop, do you have any more room on the front as it would be nice to have all the front of the building and not cut off the end. Apr 18th
33 Apr 17 Comment You have composed a nice image with a good shape made by the road and the trees. I do think you have push the saturation to high as I find the saturation is overpowering the image and could be toned back as I think they would be some nice image detail in those trees. Apr 18th
33 Apr 17 Comment Well done on holding the bright areas and getting detail in the darks. Some lovely colours and works as an image. Have to agree it works as it is. Apr 18th
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39 Apr 17 Comment I think David's comment sums this picture up. "This is a wall hanger". This need to be viewed large with some great mounting and framing to appreciate the lighting and tones in this image. Viewing this so small you do not get the power you will see on your screen when you view large. I have a feeling this is going to be magic and will do you well what ever you decide to do with it. Apr 18th
39 Apr 17 Comment I am going to be honest here. I look at all these image over a few days so I don't react to my first opinion. My first opinion with the normal club house photographers one, the out of focus flower heads are fighting the main flower heads.
But viewing this more and more I find that you need those other heads to give this image the depth and story of the scene. The two main heads are beautiful. One little thing I would remove. There is a bright spot just left of the top of the out of focus large head. This would make a great card. Nice image. 		Apr 18th
39 Apr 17 Comment The image of the boy, yes boy with his cigar is brilliant and placed just right in the frame to get the best impact from the image. The tones are spot on and work. SO please take this back into Photoshop and get rid of whatever that is behind his head as that is killing the picture dead and the power of the image would be greater without it. Apr 18th
39 Apr 17 Comment It is really sad to see an image like this that we as human have allowed a building of this stature to go into decline but it is a photographers dream when you can get into them. You have caught a good graphic image that shows the sad state of the building. The graphic structure of the image I find a touch harsh and think you may have gone over the top with that. I am also worried about the grey patches on the pillars on the left hand side where the light has hit them, they do not look right as all the detail has been lost. But I will say this image has impact and gets across the state of decay of the building. Apr 18th
39 Apr 17 Comment For me and the way my eye works this image is all about shapes, the way the cart and shadow shapes interact and then that is broken by the smaller shape of the person legs. The texture on the wall are very good and those three dots are so important and for in a way hold the image together. Well seen and well capture street scene. Apr 18th
39 Apr 17 Comment The first thing that hits you when you view this image is your tonal work which is great and the detail in lighting you have on the mountain is excellent. The star trail just adds to the dynamic of the image. My only minor niggle is the composition. For my personnel taste I would have taken three or four steps to the left so the main cactus was not breaking the plain of the mountain. Otherwise lovely image. Apr 18th
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