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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 39 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Beautiful image Larry. I would not like the signboard a bit left and not so close to the center. Though usually I do not like to include, but you have good reason here as it adds to the overall frame. The tonal quality is very nice and you have taken care to ensure good contrast and details. |
Apr 22nd |
| 39 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Nice one Steve. There is an untold story here. I like the tint. But I would recommend a bit of tonal improvement on the whites as they are making the image a bit flat. Localized burn and dodge would help. Paul's version is nice and impactful. Good light to you Steve. |
Apr 22nd |
| 39 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Dear Vincent, I am a bit late. Apologies for that. Being in healthcare doesnt allow me much time these days unlike my photo friends from different industries who are all staying home. Ofcourse they too are working from home. Your image is beautiful and in the original I found it quiet tense on the top which you have resolved with your revised version. But I feel that now the space is larger than required. You may have your reasons if there are details visible in that zone. Yes Larry did provide a good solution and I see your image now highly improved. I like it. Good light to you Vincent. |
Apr 22nd |
| 39 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
An S composition add beauty and aesthetics to an image and you have used that to great advantage. I am not sure if I like the road revealed after the S at the right edge. Darkening it a bit would help so that the eye does not go to the edge of the frame. Nice image Paul. |
Apr 22nd |
| 39 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Jerry, this is really peaceful. I like the image and the dreamy feel. I note the feedback already given. I understand the intent here. I also like the version provided by Paul, though it does not meet the authors intent. Infact it reminds me of the pictorialism of the early era which used fog to present the atmospheric mood. |
Apr 22nd |
| 39 |
Apr 20 |
Comment |
Interesting experimentation. I do understand that there was a concept. But I am not sure that has been convincing. I would still say that some improvements can be done to fine tune. First and foremost the separation of the two elements and the neatness of the work. Second the whites and black tones are compromised. I think a bit gentle work there without much contrast and a neat cut out would help. But then I do not know if that was your intent and you wanted to have a composite with a contemporary feel. Still nice to study and introspect on authors insight. |
Apr 22nd |
| 39 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
Thanks Paul. |
Apr 11th |
| 39 |
Apr 20 |
Reply |
Thanks Dave. There is a field in the background and it is a natural. No manipulation done. You are right I was above the birds on this hilly region and was looking down at this scenario. |
Apr 11th |
6 comments - 2 replies for Group 39
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6 comments - 2 replies Total
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