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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 39 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Good one. Indeed pulling out old images and reprocessing may give it added value and life. Here in this one, I like it ; the atmosphere is good and thank you for the info. I would be a bit concerned with the near bisection of land and sky and would bring down the horizon a bit lower. Cropping out some mm of base would help. Also the image needs to be given a bit of contrast as the greys dominate. I like it. Good light to you Paul. |
Jun 18th |
| 39 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Good one Jerry. I like it; strong compo with storyline. You are great with the mobile phone. Here you have interestingly used the mobile phone to add to your storyline. i like the leading lines. I am one without a mobile phone as yet and here I see it as the one that carries your photo to the next level! Considering that it is a set up and you were in a photo walk; I would look at two other possibilities to make it a bit stronger. One, I would avoid the overlap of the mobile phone with the crowd making it distinct and less cluttered; or on the other side got more crowd with the overlap to show that the place is busy, crowded. This is just a suggestion. Good light to you Jerry. |
Jun 18th |
| 39 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Quite a nostalgic feel of old world charm here. The flower at the bottom right adds to the compo giving it perspective and depth. I find the frame a bit more grainy than needed, but I think this was your intent. But more important my concern is to burn the twig in the foreground at its topmost region as it competes with the main element and yes ofcourse that bright blob behind. Interesting work David. |
Jun 18th |
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