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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 99 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hello, Robin,
I like your way to create abstract images. The attempt to compose different geometric elements is interesting and well done.
But: I'd prefer a simply black background, without the "shapes of a wooden logstore". They distract my eyes a bit away from the main subject. |
May 23rd |
| 99 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Is it allowed to criticise strictly?
To me this image seems to be too artificial, the magician is posing too much. In my eyes, it's not natural.There is no mystic, no magic.
And: The glowing of the globe touches the hands, some fingers seem to glow, too.
Sorry for my harsh words |
May 8th |
| 99 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Thanks a lot to both of you.
@Mark: I thought it over, to create an image with less contrast. But for me the allure of the image is the almost real black and white contrast. Maybe you're right, if the main thing would be to show details of the persons in the middle arch. But I intended to show silhouettes, not details.
Anyway, I'll try a "lighter" version in LR, just for myself, but I'm in doubt....
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May 8th |
| 99 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Great in colors, wonderful in monochrome!
Unfortunatly the front blossom edge is not absolutely sharp (I think), but, anyway, it's a almost perfect image. I like the soft contrasts in white, the composition, the "quiff" of the blossom - very well done image.
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May 5th |
| 99 |
May 25 |
Comment |
I agree with your interpretation of human and nature/Mother Earth. Your image shows your idea very precisely.
B&W is the right way, but I'd find it even better to create it a bit lighter.
In the end: A great image. *** |
May 3rd |
| 99 |
May 25 |
Comment |
I like the image, too. It makes me courious to know who's sitting there round the corner. What is he reading?
The composition is interesting: Half of the image is the concrete wall. Not a standard way. |
May 3rd |
| 99 |
May 25 |
Comment |
I Think, this is a fine composition, just a look through a window. The swing is not in the center, a bit moved to the right. That's ok.
In my opinion the image would be "more alive" when the swing would be swinging. And: The contrasts are not hard as they should be. So the image looks flat to me.
[Sorry, my English is just a three year school English.] |
May 3rd |
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