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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 83 |
Jan 26 |
Reply |
Good day, Lance,
Thank you very much for taking the time to share such thoughtful and detailed feedback, I truly appreciate it.
I'm glad the dramatic intent of the photo came through, and I found your observations about balance and visual comfort especially interesting. Your point about the cropped head and the weight of the dark space at the bottom makes a lot of sense, and I can see how the square framing you suggested helps resolve that imbalance while still preserving the overall mood.
I also appreciate you sharing the alternative framing and explaining your reasoning behind it. Exploring how small compositional adjustments can shift the viewer's emotional response is something I find very valuable, and your perspective has given me a lot to think about.
Thank you again for your insight and generosity in sharing your expertise.
Best regards,
Hanna Nevreva |
Jan 30th |
| 83 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Hi Bill,
I like the tone and mood, and I really like the vintage feel of this photo. But I agree with Adi that the bright area at the top is a bit distracting and should probably be darkened, with the center being brightened. |
Jan 30th |
| 83 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Elsie,
I like the composition and the play of light and shadow. The only thing I might change is moving the people closer to the center of the composition, it feels like there's a bit too much of the fence on the right side of the frame. Nevertheless, this photograph accomplishes its main goal: it draws attention. Thank you for sharing this image with us! |
Jan 30th |
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