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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 37 |
Aug 25 |
Reply |
Thank you very much, Joseph, for your thoughtful critique. I truly appreciate your detailed feedback on both the strengths and areas for improvement. Your points about the HDR/clarity and vignette are well taken-I'll definitely keep them in mind for future processing choices. I'm glad the storytelling aspect came through strongly. |
Aug 23rd |
| 37 |
Aug 25 |
Reply |
Thank you, Kathy. I'm happy you noticed the richness of the textures and the contrasting colors of the rickshaw driver. The repetition of the rickshaws was something I wanted to emphasize, and I'm delighted it added to the cultural feel of the image. |
Aug 23rd |
| 37 |
Aug 25 |
Reply |
Thank you so much, Howard. I really appreciate your kind words about the colors, detail, and storytelling. I'm glad the slight angle worked well to bring out the depth in the scene. |
Aug 23rd |
| 37 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Peter,This is a truly outstanding image of Lake McDonald at sunrise. The calm water creates a perfect mirror reflection of the mountains and sky, giving the scene both depth and tranquility. The use of foreground, middle ground, and background is strong, though the foreground rocks spark some debate-some feel they add natural context, while others suggest cropping or removing the larger ones for a cleaner balance. I believe the composition suggested by Bob is more appropriate.
Including the people was a great choice; they provide scale and bring a human story into the frame. Technically, the exposure is excellent, and the soft haze over the lake enhances the mood beautifully. The colors are vivid and dramatic-while a few might find them a little intense, they undeniably give the photograph its striking, memorable character. |
Aug 23rd |
| 37 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Bob,
Timing & rarity: This is one of those moments wildlife photographers dream about - you caught the full breach, perfectly framed, and with sharp detail on the barnacles, flippers, and body folds. Outstanding timing.
Composition: Even though the whale was so close, you managed to include the entire animal without cutting anything off, which makes the image feel complete. Expanding the frame to level the horizon was a smart solution and it looks seamless.
Light & atmosphere: The flat light of the overcast day works in your favor here - it avoids harsh shadows and keeps all the textures visible. While it lacks dramatic contrast, it actually makes the details of the whale's skin more pronounced.
Detail: The clarity on the water droplets adds motion and power to the shot. The barnacles and scars tell the whale's story, making it more authentic.
Editing choices: I'd agree with your instinct on the brown spot. For pure wildlife/nature competitions, it should stay since it's true to the animal. But for broader contests, removing it could help the image "read" more cleanly.
Overall impression: This is a phenomenal capture - rare behavior, beautifully executed under challenging conditions. It tells both the story of the animal and the story of the photographer's perseverance. |
Aug 23rd |
| 37 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Joseph,
Depth and perspective: The suspension bridge naturally creates strong leading lines that pull the viewer's eye straight toward the horizon. It gives a wonderful sense of depth and scale.
Narrative power: The solitary figure with a hat and jacket in hand adds a human element that turns the bridge from just an architectural subject into a story. It feels contemplative and cinematic.
Light and texture: The contrast between the dry, almost monochrome foreground vegetation and the lush green beyond works very well symbolically. Slightly increasing clarity or local contrast on the bridge slats could make the path feel even more tactile.
Composition: The near-symmetry works effectively to suggest order and stability, but the subtle imbalance introduces tension - a good reminder that "not-quite-perfect" framing often feels more alive.
Color choice: While black and white could emphasize form and mood, the muted-to-green color progression tells its own story - one of transition and hope. Keeping color here feels like the right choice for your metaphor.
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Aug 23rd |
| 37 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Howard, A great capture of time. You froze the exact split second where the viewer wonders if the two performers will connect - that tension strengthens the image.
Composition. Framing both performers against the clear blue sky works beautifully; it isolates the action and keeps the focus on them. Minor adjustments like straightening the pole or removing the extra wires as Bob suggested could have made it more minimal and impactful.
Technical execution. Your choice of 1/500th of a second was just right to freeze the action while giving a sense of motion. The f/4 aperture keeps both performers sharp without losing background separation.
Color and contrast. The bright costumes against the blue sky give a fun, lively energy. The pinks, blues and greens really pop and add to the playful circus atmosphere.
Storytelling. It's not just an action photo; it tells a story about teamwork, risk and time. That's what makes it relatable, beyond technical grasp. |
Aug 22nd |
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