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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 60 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
The B&W version is definitely more interesting than the color one, especially with your adding of texture to the beach and your enhancing of the clouds, which made the God-rays appear. I would recommend you crop some of the sky from the top. You do not really need the second layer of clouds since the horizontal rays are the main feature. You also could crop a little on the bottom. The boy is in the right third vertical power line, but he does not add much to the photo overall, especially given his relative size and positioning, where no arms are visible. If you crop to make him the subject, you lose the God-rays. If you remove him, you have a nice waterscape, but would have to enter it in B&W photography because of the deletion. But the diagonal lines in the water are pleasing and lead the eye from the bottom right to the mountains in the top left. |
Jan 14th |
| 60 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
You are very fortunate to be able to visit Yosemite regularly. There are so many photo opportunities.
Your brightening of the photo overall has enhanced it, although the bright rocky area at the bottom under the trees now creates something of a barrier that does not lead the eye upward. I would suggest cropping most of it out.
Your focus seems to have been on the waterfall and rainbow mist. I hope you took a number of different photos of the scene at different angles and distances so you will have many possible versions of this iconic feature to play with in the future, which can emphasize different things.
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Jan 14th |
| 60 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
The dramatic qualities of this scene are enhanced in the B & W version. There are many different photos possible in the current scene , depending on cropping. So you could have lots of options to choose from, depending on your personal preferences. This one is certainly eye-catching. |
Jan 14th |
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