|
| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 32 |
Dec 24 |
Reply |
I do like the line curving to the right. However, I'm always concerned reversing images of locations or scenery that I'll find someone who knows the location and questions why I've altered it. |
Dec 22nd |
| 32 |
Dec 24 |
Comment |
Your lighting on this image is beautiful, and very well distributed in the monochrome image, which is impressive to me seeing the bright spots in your color image. The symmetry also is effective here. For me, the ripples are not distracting. |
Dec 22nd |
| 32 |
Dec 24 |
Comment |
I agree with the others that the conversion to monochrome and your efforts to remove the background distractions are effective in this image. Although extra nitpicky, I'd probably also remove the fence rails showing in the upper right corner of the image, too. A nice capture and work on this one. |
Dec 22nd |
| 32 |
Dec 24 |
Comment |
Interesting .... on my monitor, your original image is showing up clearer and sharper than original 2. I'm not certain why that is the case. I like the monochrome conversion and the wind/movement, but I agree with Diana that the crop right at the wrist/hand area is awkward, so I, too, would crop just a little bit more from the bottom of this image. |
Dec 22nd |
| 32 |
Dec 24 |
Comment |
You've captured fun cousin time, and I agree that the expressions make this photo. The tonality on the face on the left still looks a little bit bright to me, but darkening it may create more issues than just leaving it as you have it. I agree with Diana that I'd darken the background some more to keep it from drawing attention, or you also could consider cropping more from the top, even though that would mean not showing the entire tops of their heads. |
Dec 22nd |
| 32 |
Dec 24 |
Comment |
After seeing your image of this building, suddenly I feel better about my own housekeeping! I can see that you used the newer building as a counterpoint to the old one in your image, but I think that for me, the image is a little too busy. I like Tom's suggested crop. Also, have you considered cropping most of the new building out and just keeping a small part where the plants on the derelict building are sticking up? I think that might work well. |
Dec 22nd |
| 32 |
Dec 24 |
Comment |
You've done a nice job creating this montage, and I think your dark mountains work nicely here. I do agree that the bird's feathers could use more detail, if you have it, and that the hand needs to be adjusted to match the brighter skin tones of the face. You and others make me wish I were more creative in coming up with ideas for my images. Alas, I create good messes when I attempt anything remotely similar. |
Dec 22nd |
6 comments - 1 reply for Group 32
|
6 comments - 1 reply Total
|