Activity for User 185 - Jennifer Doerrie - jensimages@yahoo.com

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32 May 21 Comment I'm already likely to run afoul of the preference for more space, but I find the crop of the second ear a bit awkward, and think I prefer this image with a tighter crop. To me, it makes the subject more intimate. I agree with Lynn that it didn't seem to be floating to me, but the rhino does appear ill or distressed in the monochrome image. May 31st
32 May 21 Comment I'm afraid I cannot relate to risking large sums of money, but you've done a nice job with the story-telling aspect of this image. I agree with Tom that adding more contrast is an improvement. I think I'd like the left side of the image just a little bit brighter as well. May 31st
32 May 21 Comment As others already suggested, I believe this image benefits from a more vertical crop, tilted subject, and including the base. Even after having entered several PSA exhibitions and judged a few, it is challenging to predict what works and doesn't in any given exhibition. I tend to find many the monochrome exhibitions go for dramatic contrast, or even things like high or low key. I do think this is different from what we usually see in the exhibitions, though, and that in my mind is a good thing. May 31st
32 May 21 Comment You've made nice use of the leading lines in the composition of this image. As already mentioned, I would like more space at the top. Also, I am curious as to why you've darkened the highlights (other than perhaps to bring out the clouds?), as I feel the image has lost the contrast with the brighter tones and would benefit from being brighter, even if you left the sky darker. May 31st
32 May 21 Comment As others already have mentioned, you did a nice job straightening and converting this image. I agree with you that I would not take the sky as dark as Diana has. Those of us from tornado country are not fans of a black sky! I do think you could increase the contrast a bit more on your image, but definitely keep the textures in the building. They add a lot of interest for me. May 31st
32 May 21 Comment You've given yourself a good challenge photographing a white subject on a white background. For me, it did help to remove the vignette and increase the contrast. I actually kind of like the high key concept, too, although perhaps not quite as bright as Diana has it. Did you actually make salsa with these onions? May 31st
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