Activity for User 1828 - Gary Vandemark - gvandemark

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99 Oct 24 Comment Robin
A window with multiple panes is a great way to frame the photo without distracting the viewer. I didn't quickly understand what was in the lower portion, as it was somewhat muddled and run together. But after looking at the entire photo, it became more clear. Very creative idea.
The sky, especially in the upper right frame, looks "blotchy" or pixelated to me; maybe from over processing.
Oct 28th
99 Oct 24 Comment Kathleen
Very sharp and clear throughout. Also lots of different geometric lines leading to a virtual vanishing point to the left. But the image is too busy for my taste. I don't know where to look and nothing seems to be going on. Maybe an action shot after the train starts moving would be better.
Oct 28th
99 Oct 24 Comment Peter
Very sharp image throughout with lots of detail. Nice range of tones. Certainly a good story here also. I like it!
Oct 28th
99 Oct 24 Comment Gerard
Wow! Dramatic sky with sharp contrast in the castle. Makes me wish I was there. Only thing I would consider changing is to add a linear gradient from the bottom up to the castle and darken it a bit. That would draw the viewer's eyes from the bottom up to the brighter subject of the castle and the sky. Also, crop off a little from the bottom, as has been suggested Good job!
Oct 28th
99 Oct 24 Comment Barbara
I really like the way you captured the tonal variations in the petals and the fact there are 3 blossoms. Beautiful photo. I am a little distracted by the darkness of the shadow in the leftmost flower's petal. I made a feeble attempt to lighten it but there weren't enough pixels to do a good job. I am also not a fan of fancy borders that detract from the beauty of the subject. A simple stroke suffices, IMO.
Oct 28th

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