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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 26 |
Aug 18 |
Reply |
Yes, it still needs some adjusting. The lower right window is off. I have not cloned it. I need to perfect using the perspective tool of the editing program. With each adjustment, if space is left, the program fills it in automatically, and sometimes with unwanted material. Thanks, Jose. |
Aug 19th |
| 26 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
This is a colorful scene with the flowers, and the building is an architectural curiosity. I'd love to see the whole house. I might prefer the photo without the man in order to see the iron railing unobstructed against the window. I don't see any changes needed, but there is an unusual image in the window. If the reflection in the window can be darkened it might reveal the image more clearly. It looks to me like an image from a religious painting. |
Aug 12th |
| 26 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
A stunning photo. Love the lighting, especially the starburst and pop of red shoes! To me the sunlight behind the bride offers a lead-in to the scene. My monitor isn't picking up the halo, but you had a bright day so the sky through the windows would be bright and washed out. I don't find the blue edits offensive, just different from the light around the arches to the left. I've used a graduated filter tool when this happens and feathering it helps bring things to a happy medium. I hope you got lots of photos. The building is remarkable. |
Aug 12th |
| 26 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
You had fun with this, and got a lot of exercise to boot! It's a beautiful creation and very clever pulling the scenes together into one grand finale. Beautiful work. The buildings are interesting and reflected colors from the fireworks are beautiful on the water. The only spot that seems a bit too perfected, to me, is the main large burst. More blur added or separations in more of the trails, I think would help them appear more natural. A tiny circle in the middle of the large burst needs to be removed, and to the left in the water is an odd dotted line. Above the white building where the sky is cloudy dark blue, I would darken it to match the night sky around the other buildings. |
Aug 12th |
| 26 |
Aug 18 |
Reply |
Thank you, Steve. I can go back. It's in my town (Staunton, Va.). I'm not sure it faces the right direction to pick up decent shadows, but I'll keep checking. Good tip! |
Aug 6th |
| 26 |
Aug 18 |
Reply |
I know...Lightroom still hasn't made it into my world. Snapseed's Perspective tool offers realigning the whole image, individual sides, also individual quadrants. I thought it would be easy until I played around with the quadrants. I like your adjustments except for the right being close the edge. But, with patience I might be able to fill that edge to balance it out. Thank you! |
Aug 6th |
3 comments - 3 replies for Group 26
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| 32 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Before the round ends I wanted to repay you and offer my thoughts. Beautiful scene, lovely lead-ins, especially nice framing through the tree. I prefer the original, and I would crop similarly to Marla's version. Consider removing 2 things: tiny branch that falls almost midway in the frame, and the object in the water behind the branches. Adjusting to bring out textures in the distant layered mountains will help strengthen your image. |
Aug 26th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 32
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| 51 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I hope you don't mind my interference. I'm from Group 26, but I'm hooked on phoneography. I'm watching, listening, learning. The house in your image was nicely corrected. I think Snapseed might hold the answer for the light itself. The 'free' selection works wonders. I love the clouds in your original and would try to keep them. |
Aug 26th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 51
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5 comments - 3 replies Total
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