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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Comment |
Hello everyone, here is the final copy. I removed the overlay and tried to work with the light, exposure, and temperature a little more. I also removed a couple of dust spots and removed the crop to include more bubbles. I like the way it turned out. |
Jan 15th |
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| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Reply |
Thank you Dean |
Jan 13th |
| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Reply |
Thank you Barbara |
Jan 13th |
| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Reply |
Thank you Anne. |
Jan 13th |
| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Reply |
Thank you for the feedback Damon. I am going to work on this and see how it comes out. More to come... |
Jan 13th |
| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Reply |
Hi Anne and Damon,
I really like these additional perspectives. Can we tie everything in to part of the story we are trying to tell. Can it fit in? I had to laugh at the comment about looking for distractions. As I am continuing to develop my experience in the mechanics of the camera I am currently focusing more heavily on the aesthetics of the image. I look at the feeling of the image and how each part fits into a story to be discovered. You will probably see this in most of my feedback for now. I am so happy to be part of this group and I very much look forward to learning from everyone. |
Jan 10th |
| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Comment |
Hi Blair,
You definitely captured their personalities. It's a unique Christmas portrait, without the usual props. The green back ground against red pajamas and the headband that also matches the background are very nice. I don't think I would change anything. By cropped image and single tree stump keep the focus on your girls. |
Jan 10th |
| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Comment |
Hi Anne,
There is such an intent captured in your bird's eyes, wings, and posture. There is something of great interest in his sight. The most important part- his face- is sharp, centered, and framed by the branches. I am trying to decide how I feel about the leaf under his tail feathers. It's a beautiful color that compliments the talons and the colors of the chest, but maybe standing as a lone leaf against a blue background it calls for some praise too. I would love to know what you think about this as it would be helpful in my own work or future assessments. Thank you Anne |
Jan 10th |
| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Comment |
Hi Damon,
Great job with this image. This couple looks to have the museum all to themselves. What perfect timing and angles to get them right in the middle of the image framed by the lines cast in shadows, those of the windows, and between the door frames. Then there's the framing from the tunnel and it's shadows. The viewer is coming into the scene of shiny cars and echoing footsteps. Although not entirely distracting, the man on the veranda could be removed or maybe just changing the color of his shirt to make his presence a little more subtle. |
Jan 10th |
| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Comment |
Hi Rita, Ocean vibes for sure! I see the waves throughout the ocean, the clouds, and even their reflections case on the water. I can't help but get closer and closer to the screen not only to search for more characteristics of the ocean, but also to immerse myself in the blend of colors moving through the water and air. |
Jan 9th |
| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Comment |
Hi Barbara,
This image is beautiful. I love the color and especially how the shade of the color changes with the texture of the petals as then bend and wilt a bit on the outer edges. Light painting is new to me. My only exposure has been to words or figures drawn out in dark surroundings. I have not seen anything like this before. I would love to know more about how you light painted for this image. Thank you |
Jan 9th |
| 60 |
Jan 24 |
Comment |
Hi Dean,
I agree with the group that your image does really well at setting a dark and chilly mood. The trees appear to extend in all directions reaching for the fog or anything else passing through. I love that you can follow the limbs to the tiniest of branches creating a web of traps on this earie night. I feel that the light within the fog leads the viewer to the trap. The hint of amber color within the highest branches also calls attention to those details. At first I wasn't sure how I felt about the reflection on the bottom right side of the image but later realized that it gave a bit of a 3D effect to the image creating a feeling that the light and fog were reaching out towards me too.
The only suggestion I can think to give here is possibly either cropping a bit more on the right side to remove the tree trunk, re-extending or somehow bringing out the tree a little more, or as Barbara suggested- adding a border. I see the tree trunk on close inspection but without looking closely it looks like the border on that side is irregular or clipped because of the blending with the dark web background. |
Jan 9th |
7 comments - 5 replies for Group 60
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7 comments - 5 replies Total
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