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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 26 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
A very striking contrast between the high-rise in the background and the upward-pointing finger. I like the (almost) monochrome treatment of the image. I also like seeing some reflections on the finger. I don't see anything to change. |
Aug 16th |
| 26 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
The interesting part of this photo is the movement captured around the model. I don't need to see her eyes, since my attention goes to her mouth and the spinning scarf. I also like the yellow tones of the image. Not so sure about the gas cylinders. When I saw them and the tube (plus the movement around the model), I immediately thought of giant hookahs, but she was not smoking (!). |
Aug 9th |
| 26 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
As Kirsti said, it looks like an old, faded photo, which is good. You got an interesting composition, with the main subject clearly catching the viewer's attention, and the elements in the background complementing him. I would make the irregular frame a little thinner, and definitely make the reflection full (even if some cloning is necessary). |
Aug 9th |
| 26 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
I agree with the B&W conversion. It allows concentrating on the geometric elements of the aloe plant. Everything looks very sharp. A little more contrast might improve the final image, and a little crop from the top would make the chopped leaf not so obvious. |
Aug 9th |
| 26 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Very nice street scene. My eyes go from the lamp on the left to the one at the end, enjoying the graffiti on the wall and the muted colors. The stairs provide interesting geometric elements that contrast with the vertical walls. The two people are needed to complement the scene. As others have said, you might want to crop a little from the left. |
Aug 9th |
| 26 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
I like the composition obtained through the unusual point of view, with the road bringing the viewer's attention to the villa. The perfect light on the hills gives the image a three-dimensional look. Regarding the problem with the slanted villa, you may partially solve it by rotating the photo slightly counterclockwise until the top of the roof is perfectly horizontal. |
Aug 9th |
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