Activity for User 179 - Jose Cartas - jcartas@hotmail.com

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26 Mar 24 Comment The image tells an interesting story, enhanced by the third animal watching at the contest and the muted colors. I can see that the two deer are very engaged and ready to fight. I wonder whether you have some pictures where they are closer and/or even fighting. But I like the photo as it is and wouldn't change anything. Mar 9th
26 Mar 24 Comment It's a minimalist composition that works very well. Like you, I was immediately attracted to the red lifesaver, which anchors the image. You achieved an interesting combination of vertical elements (plus reflections) with the horizontal bridge and dock. The post-processing produced very natural colors, which give the mood of late afternoon or an approaching storm. I might crop from the bottom, bringing the horizon lower and closer to 1/3 of the frame. Mar 9th
26 Mar 24 Comment You can also title this photo "Is this the End of the Line?" The buffaloes create a perfect curve, and even the space between the last one and the rest of the pack adds an element of interest to the image. The colors are very appropriate to the story you are telling, which is clear to the viewer. I don't see anything to improve. Mar 9th
26 Mar 24 Comment I like the geometry of the descending terraces, enhanced by your cropping. It was good to add the human element, especially considering the red colors. I have two suggestions. One is to darken the roof of the building in the middle, so it blends better with the environment. The second is to apply a warming filter to the whole image. Mar 9th
26 Mar 24 Comment Even with the leading line bringing the viewer to the lake, I find the composition a little too busy. The road where you stay is in a way distracting, and I would have preferred for the space to be covered by trees (nothing you can do about that!). Another issue I found with this image is that the colors are too saturated, not natural (maybe over-processed). Mar 9th
26 Mar 24 Comment It must have been a very interesting workshop. Being the photo taken in Spain and because of the blue tones I thought about Picasso. I like your composition and the colors, with some orange coming in the background. In this sense, I don't see room for improvement. What bothers me a little is the transition between the hard blacks of the figures and their "ghosts." Maybe you can soften the transition; but this is up to you. Mar 9th
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