Activity for User 179 - Jose Cartas - jcartas@hotmail.com

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26 Sep 22 Reply I tried your suggestion. Here is the result. Sep 12th
26 Sep 22 Comment I like the nice, muted colors, with a mix of warm and cool tones. Nothing to add in terms of composition, except that if you go ahead with Bob's suggestion of bringing the moon down, then you can crop some from the top and eliminate negative space in the sky.

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26 Sep 22 Comment The lighting is very good in this portrait. I tend to agree with Bob on the hat, maybe not so fitting for a young girl. You might want to get rid of the two bright spots on the chair, left from her right shoulder. Maybe it's my monitor, but I would reduce a little the vignette. Sep 6th
26 Sep 22 Comment You achieved a lovely mood. Beyond the tones, I like the composition with the framing provided by the fence. The white flowers add interest to the scene. My only comment would be to clone out, or darken, the bright spot on the top left (it looks like space between the trees). I also have second thoughts about the white spots close to the bird house. Sep 6th
26 Sep 22 Comment It is a good action photo, where you managed to get sharp subjects with some movement thanks to a well-executed panning. I still find the background a little distracting in spite of your darkening, especially because it's not the background I would expect in a rugby game. My main critique is that I find the framing too tight. I don't know what was to the right of the boys, but I would have preferred a rectangular cropping with some space for them to run. Sep 6th
26 Sep 22 Comment It is a very delicate image. I like how the stem guides you from the top right to the center of interest. Excellent color balance with a complementary and not distracting background. A minor suggestion would be to eliminate the two tiny black spots on the petals (one at 3:00, the other at 6:00), and the line (cut) on the petal at 5:00. Sep 6th
26 Sep 22 Reply No vignette applied. I will try some. Sep 3rd
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