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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 26 |
Apr 22 |
Comment |
I agree with you that what makes this photo is the unusual diagonal point of view. It is a strong composition, with a clean background. Although the eyes and beak are in focus (even some catch light), I would have liked that the feathers be sharper (not always easy!). |
Apr 10th |
| 26 |
Apr 22 |
Comment |
Nice picture of the monkey, which is looking at the camera with tack sharp eyes (did you use flash?). The monkey is engaged in some activity, and this makes the image more interesting. Good use of the rule of thirds, with the monkey on the right spot and enough information filling the rest of the frame. My only suggestion, which is not permitted in nature photography, is to eliminate the branch coming out of its rear end, which looks like if it were its tail. |
Apr 6th |
| 26 |
Apr 22 |
Comment |
For a high-key image the exposure looks correct. So, I wouldn't change it. Interesting model and interesting pose. My only suggestion is to crop a little from the top, since there is too much negative space there. |
Apr 6th |
| 26 |
Apr 22 |
Comment |
Interesting take on a very popular subject. I like the low point of view and the wide-angle effect. Good exposure. Now it's too late, but I would have preferred a more symmetric composition. Maybe it wasn't even possible because there would be no separation between the Oculus and the building on the left. Think about eliminating the crane on the top of the building on the right. Also, there are two white spots on the left "wing" that you can clone out. |
Apr 6th |
| 26 |
Apr 22 |
Comment |
Normally, I would have complained about the many "distracting" bright spots in the background. However, here they complement the droplets dripping from the bird's beak. Composition is excellent, with enough space to the left of the bird and some reflections. Exposure is right: no harsh contrast, sufficient detail on the bird, and even some rim light. The only bright spot that annoys me is the line created by several drops at the middle of the left edge. |
Apr 6th |
| 26 |
Apr 22 |
Comment |
I don't see anything to improve here. The picture tells a nice story, with all the information needed by the viewer. I agree with you about the curving track, which makes the image appealing. The added sky blends perfectly with the original exposure. |
Apr 6th |
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