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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 26 |
Mar 22 |
Comment |
Welcome to the group, Ann!
I like this interesting portrait, with an appealing pose and very unusual hat. Everything is in focus, although you shot at f/2.8, which is remarkable. Lighting is spot-on, but I have second thoughts about the vignette. It helps concentrate on the subject, but I find it too obvious, and I would make it subtler. I also see a line in the background going down from the top, a little to the left of the "ship;" maybe you want to clone it out. |
Mar 19th |
| 26 |
Mar 22 |
Comment |
Definitely, the color version. It separates the elements better than the B&W, and the warm light on his face and beard is a plus. You captured the atmosphere perfectly, with the smoke contributing to the whole picture. As Tony suggested, I would crop a little from the left, since there seems to be too much empty space. |
Mar 15th |
| 26 |
Mar 22 |
Comment |
Nice picture, with the muted red and green tones. It does give the feeling of a storm, and the composition is right on the money. The more I look at the barn, the more I see a face: two eyes, a nose, and an open mouth. I didn't find anything to improve. |
Mar 6th |
| 26 |
Mar 22 |
Comment |
Another interesting environmental portrait; although, to me, not as powerful as the one from last month. It is clear the story this photo is telling, and the bunch of clothes provides a good framing to the lady. I find particularly interesting the contrast between the light area where she sits and the darker surrounding borders. I would even increase the contrast with some vignetting. By the way, she is perfectly lit. |
Mar 6th |
| 26 |
Mar 22 |
Comment |
Good juxtaposition of the tractor with the flowers; both color wise (red vs. yellow) and man-made vs. nature. You managed to hide the open space of the tractor but, as you said, the image is too tight on the right. I would add some space there. Also, the clouds make the sky more interesting, but I find the blue not natural; some color correction might be needed. |
Mar 6th |
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