Activity for User 179 - Jose Cartas - jcartas@hotmail.com

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26 Mar 21 Comment I particularly like the composition, with the sweeping curves and the strong colors. I don't have any problem with the motorcycle going right to left. Although close to the frame, it still has some room to move. Now it's too late, but I would have preferred a slower shutter speed (1/30, 1/15?) to show more movement and get the red jacket a little blurred. Mar 8th
26 Mar 21 Reply It can be a leaf. I thought it was a space between two bricks. In any case, I find it distracting. Mar 6th
26 Mar 21 Comment A lovely photo! It's interesting how in spite of the separation between kid and mother (space, focus), the viewer feels the relationship between them and how proud she is of him. The boy is not tack sharp, but to me this is a plus: it lends the photo a vintage aura. I agree with you in cutting the boy's hat. Since you have already darkened the left bottom corner (suggested by the other Bob), I would just advice to clone the diagonal line (separation between bricks) running from his shoulder and to eliminate the red elements on the wall.

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26 Mar 21 Comment Definitely the color version, mainly because of the contrast between the pink and the dark green. I especially like the shapes and texture. You straightened the image a lot, but I think that you still need to shift a little to the left the bottom of the board where the numbers are. Instead of including more of the door, I would crop a little from the top (until where the number starts). Mar 6th
26 Mar 21 Comment This is a well thought and executed composition. The viewer needs to look carefully to realize that these are two separate buildings. I'm sure you can get a lot of abstracts with different crops. I agree with Bob that a dark sky can improve the picture. Mar 6th
26 Mar 21 Comment Excellent idea and wonderful composition and color (very subtle). What I like the most is the arch of light in the back glass. Any reason for picking the two glasses with text? I would try a similar photo with glasses without text. Bob commented on the light from the top, and I agree with him. Being picky: moving the camera a tad to the right would have achieved perfect symmetry (e.g., the overlapping of the glasses); also, the table could be of a uniform tone, without the line running across it. Mar 6th
26 Mar 21 Comment I like this image much more than the one you submitted last month. It looks more natural and it is literally explosive. Everything works well here, with a composition flowing from the center and good color balance. My only comment: I would darken the green triangle on the upper right. Mar 6th
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