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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 26 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
The lights of the pier and their reflections drawing a Z are incredible. That's all you need for a perfect composition, but on top of it you got the moon on the right spot and a lot of texture in the sand. I like the image as it is, but you can also try to bring the brown areas (particularly in the sky) a little darker and closer to black. Also, I feel the pier tilted to the left (not much), something very easy to correct. |
Nov 14th |
| 26 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
Good capture of the butterfly on the flower, with the main elements in good focus. The composition is very pleasant, descending diagonally from the top left to the butterfly. My only recommendation is to eliminate the dark spot on the top right and the dark line coming down from the top left to the flower; they are probably some out-of-focus elements, but they look like dirt. |
Nov 14th |
| 26 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
A very graphic composition, with the tracks creating interesting diagonals leading to the main subjects. Although the image has a "grunge" feeling, it's still not over the top. I agree with the elimination of the pole and the adding of the sky, which looks very natural. Maybe you could make the sky not so dark and more vibrant. |
Nov 14th |
| 26 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
It was a good decision to shoot the reflections, instead of the sky. You got an interesting abstract with good colors. I would saturate the whole image a bit more and open up the blues a little. |
Nov 14th |
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