Activity for User 179 - Jose Cartas - jcartas@hotmail.com

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26 Nov 19 Comment I was impressed by this parking garage when I visited Chicago four years ago. What's interesting in your photo is that you combined the visual elements of the garage tower with adjoining structures. The conversion to B&W works very well here. I don't have anything to add regarding composition. I agree with your removal of the sign. However, you need to improve the cloning, because it shows in broken diagonal lines and also in darker tones. Nov 17th
26 Nov 19 Comment Very appropriate name for a place like this one. The picture is a high-contrast one, but it works very well here, so I would keep the very bright and very dark areas. I don't see how you can improve the image, since all elements are there: a mountain, clouds, a dark sky, and some sun.‒ Nov 11th
26 Nov 19 Comment Nice play of curves and circles, plus shadows and lights. In terms of composition, I don't mind the curved lines on the right, that's what is to be expected from the angle you took the picture. On the other hand, I would bring the left lines of the glass window perfectly vertical. I would also open up some dark areas of the ceiling, to get a more even exposure. You are right that the clock is not sharp, but you can't do much about it. Nov 11th
26 Nov 19 Comment The posture of the bird is very appealing, looking directly into the camera. The separation with the out-of-focus background works very well, so one can concentrate on the main subject. Here, I would like more detail on the feathers, something difficult due to the high contrast between light and dark areas. The shadow coming from its head doesn't help; additionally, it "cuts" the claws from the bird's legs. Nov 11th
26 Nov 19 Comment The juxtaposition of the rail with its shadow brings the image to a higher level. You managed to get a lot of texture on the wall, and everything is perfectly lit. I'm indifferent between the original and the flipped image.‒ Nov 11th
26 Nov 19 Comment Welcome to the group Tony! I like your image because it tells a story. It is nice that the two kids and the goat are looking in the same direction. It also interesting how the mother and the calf are competing for the milk. You are right, Maasai people like bright colors, especially red and blue. To improve the photo, I would try to bring out-of-focus the tree trunks "growing" from the boy's head. What to me is most distracting is the lack of separation between the boy's blanket and his mother's skirt. The colors are too similar and give the boy a strange shape. Nov 11th
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