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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 26 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
I prefer the original image, with more of the main subject. It makes the background less distracting and I have more information on the instrument. The best parts of the photo are his expression and all the texture you captured in his shirt. Looking carefully, one sees the movement of his right hand. The skin tone is also wonderful. If you decide for the cropped image, then clone out his knee at the bottom and the watch. |
Aug 18th |
| 26 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
This is a very well seen image. The boots tell a story and the background fits perfectly with the main subject. The brown tones are also adequate to what the photo wants to convey. Perhaps you wanted it so, but I find the light too harsh and I would try to soften it a little. |
Aug 18th |
| 26 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
The bird (eagle) on the top of the tree immediately caught my attention. It's small but it is definitely an anchor point of the image. What I like most about the composition is the concentric circles formed by the water. There are a lot of elements but, in a way, I don't find the image too busy. I am not so sure about the tones: some have already commented about pumping up the blue in the sky and I agree. I would also make the green more vibrant. |
Aug 18th |
| 26 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Interesting composition with good use of slow shutter speed. I think that you got the texture of the water just right. My two comments repeat what you already heard from Bob and Belinda: crop out (or clone) the dark triangle on the top right, and get rid of the branch on the rocks. |
Aug 18th |
| 26 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
These are really two different photos! It's incredible how much you got out of the original, bringing all the texture in the petals and the leaves. I like the composition in general, although I would darken the half leaf showing between the petals and the other leaf, on the top left. Also, I would clone out the small bright spot on this dark leaf. |
Aug 18th |
| 26 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
It's hard to believe that it was taken with a phone. Perhaps the app helped a lot to the final image (I am totally ignorant in iphone photography). You got here all the elements for a good composition, including the curved leading lines, and the tones match the subject. Nothing to recommend to improve it, except to eliminate the leaves of the tree on the right. Also, there are a lot of lines coming from the tower structure: I don't think that it's too difficult to get rid of them, and you'll get a cleaner image. |
Aug 18th |
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