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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 40 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
Hi Catherine, I really like the colors, crop, and composition of this image. I'm glad I don't have to walk across that old thing! It looks very peaceful and quiet, slowly growing old and falling apart. I wonder if it would look creepy in black and white? |
Dec 12th |
| 40 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
Hi Ling Ling, you did a nice job of capturing the birds in flight. Moving birds are very hard to shoot. You might try a faster camera speed if there's enough light. There's a lot to look at in your photo, so you can try choosing one bird and lightening it to make it the center of attention (making "a place for the eye to rest"). Or you could try cropping in on just one bird that's especially in focus. I find their footprint trails especially interesting. And I'm wondering where you were standing to get this shot. It looks like you're in the water with the birds! :-) |
Dec 12th |
| 40 |
Dec 25 |
Reply |
Thank you. |
Dec 12th |
| 40 |
Dec 25 |
Reply |
Thank you. |
Dec 12th |
| 40 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
Hi Don, this is a nice image of a water scene. The horizon is straight, the colors are nice, and the sky is great. But I'm not sure what story you're trying to tell the viewer. I'm not sure what the metal structure on the right is that's cut off. At the end of the pier, it looks like there's a bench. If it is a bench, it might make a funny image to crop it and show there's no way to get to the bench due to the erosion. |
Dec 12th |
| 40 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
Hi Shari, this is a cute photo. I can see that you did a lot of work on it to remove distractions in the background, and you did this well. I think the story is that the little girl is imitating her mom, both looking left, both have their legs in the same position, both carrying purses. But if the purses are the story, then you might want to draw more attention to them by making them the brightest objects in the image. Also, the mom is unnaturally much darker than the girl, but they're standing in the same place and lighting. I recommend making the parts of the story the brightest and darkening the unimportant parts (especially the white column next to the mom's hand). |
Dec 12th |
| 40 |
Dec 25 |
Comment |
Hi Andrew, I think this is a beautiful photo that should be framed and put on your wall! The foreground makes me feel like I'm standing right there. The contrast in dark and light along the mountain ridge against the sky on the right creates a line that leads me into the picture to the center where the lake is, which is the brightest part of the image. The brightest part captures the attention. The bright green farmland also leads the eye to the lake. You might want to add a little vignetting at the bottom corners. I agree with others about the haze on the hill. Great job! |
Dec 12th |
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