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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 40 |
Sep 25 |
Comment |
Thank you, everyone! |
Sep 27th |
| 40 |
Sep 25 |
Comment |
Hi Catherine,
Great image! Just fix the horizon. Can the image be made sharper? Where were you when you shot this picture? Were you on a boat? |
Sep 27th |
| 40 |
Sep 25 |
Comment |
Ling Ling,
What a great photo! Wow! You're so lucky to have seen this! I like your revised image in reply to Mike Cohen, but you might want to crop a little from the left, as Andrew said. By the way, the child might have a cut on its left ear since I see a little pink. |
Sep 27th |
| 40 |
Sep 25 |
Comment |
Hi Don,
This is a very cool shot and interesting subject. I like the tone/coloring that you used. I think you should NOT straighten the lines, though, since the crookedness of the wood tells a big part of the story. If you un-straighten the lines, you'd have to make it clear that it's not your camera making the lines crooked, but that the wall itself is crooked - so make sure the bottom horizon is straight. I recommend removing the diagonal metal pole coming in from the top left, and not cropping so much of the wall out so that viewers can see how dilapidated and crooked the building is. The clarity is a bit too harsh, I think. Maybe also use some vignetting to guide the viewer's eyes a little since there's no place to "rest the eyes". |
Sep 27th |
| 40 |
Sep 25 |
Comment |
Hi Henry,
This is a very different landscape than where I live in Maryland with rolling hills and small mountains. It looks like a very flat landscape in your photo. I can't tell the size of the windmill compared to the barn silos and whether they're both at the same distance away or if the windmill is closer. I wish there more space to the left. I think cropping the top way down to near the top of the windmill would show how tall the windmill is and how flat the land is - panoramic shape. I agree with Andrew about adding more contrast. |
Sep 27th |
| 40 |
Sep 25 |
Comment |
Hi Julie,
I like your Original #2 the best - the building looks realistic and has a nice amount of texture. I think #3 looks like a pencil drawing and is lacking the detail and texture in the building so it doesn't look real, especially with such an angry sky. Maybe tone down the drama in the sky (in final and #2) to look more realistic; otherwise it looks like a tornado is about to drop down, but I think the story you're trying to tell is about the beautiful angles and lines in the roof. |
Sep 27th |
| 40 |
Sep 25 |
Comment |
Hi Andrew,
This is a really nice architectural image. Well seen! I like all of the different lines and angles. I like Don's version in black and white since it draws my attention more towards those lines and angles. I like the parent and child in the middle but recommend removing the people on the right. As Ling Ling said, there's a new feature in LR to "erase" glass reflections and even people. I also recommend removing the very top of the antenna since it's being cut off at the top crop - in other words, make it a little shorter so it doesn't appear to be cut off (or remove it completely if you prefer). |
Sep 27th |
7 comments - 0 replies for Group 40
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| 45 |
Sep 25 |
Comment |
Hi David,
I was just scanning through all of the DD images this month, saw the photo of the spider and KNEW it had to be yours! Well done! I'm in DD40. |
Sep 27th |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 45
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8 comments - 0 replies Total
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