Activity for User 1770 - Aaron Burdin - theyear1500@yahoo.com

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31 Comments / 10 Replies Posted

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8 Feb 24 Reply i did lighten the wall. It does work better. Feb 28th
8 Feb 24 Reply thanks, good suggestion. Feb 28th
8 Feb 24 Comment interesting subject. My eye goes to the dark roof, if the sculpture is the intended subject, that is not what my eye goes too.

looks like a documentation photo and not necessarily an artistic one. I would have liked to see it with a much lower angle looking up, perhaps placing the sculpture's head in the center of the roof. this would provide leading lines and focus the audience's eyes.
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8 Feb 24 Comment interesting idea and one worth pursuing. To me it does not work, the eye looks out of focus, and it just looks like the image was poorly taken not that it was intentional. The idea of adding motion to part of an image like that, and executing that idea with multiple exposures is very interesting. Feb 28th
8 Feb 24 Comment great lines and shapes. I would like to see it in B&W to focus on those lines. Feb 28th
8 Feb 24 Comment great action shot, nice colors, whites are not blown out. The horizon does not seem to be level. I might have put more head space below, showing just how high and what the bird was looking at. Feb 28th
8 Feb 24 Comment interesting photos with some cool lines. I might have darkened the shadows in order to emphasize the lines. Feb 28th

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