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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 49 |
May 24 |
Comment |
Hey Josh,
Thanks for your comments, I'm glad you liked the image.
The white was mostly because it was a very foggy morning and that sort of set the tone. I just emphasized that in post by cleaning up the buildings (Dehaze) and then adding light and pushing the Whites in the sky area.
I know it looks kind of unreal, but there was nothing cropped out of the original capture, the building on the right is semi-eliptical which gives it that sharp edge from my perspective.
thanks again ... Cheers |
May 25th |
| 49 |
May 24 |
Comment |
Hi Alan,
A lovely colourful bright image. Well done.
I totaly agree with David's comment about giving the subjects some breathing space on the right. If there was more space there I think it would be more comfortable on the eye, and it would promote the feeling of forward movement.
One thing I would say though is the duck in the front is far sharper and more focused than the one in the rear. Perhaps a slightly wider DoF would have done the trick?
Cheers. |
May 18th |
| 49 |
May 24 |
Comment |
Hi Peggy,
Great shot, I love the use of the framed composition, it gives such strenth and interest to the image.
If I was to suggest anything, I would increase contrast of the internal walls ( not the scene in the background ) to make the most of the natural weathering of the stone, and to strengthen the frame drawing the viewer's eye into the scene.
Really nice image!
Cheers |
May 18th |
| 49 |
May 24 |
Comment |
Hi David,
Lovely shot! You have done so well with the exposure to get the highlights in the sky, and yet the forground, mid, and background beautifully lit.
I personally wouldnt crop out any of the structures as I think they form a part of the story, if anything I would take a smidge off the top of the image. Yes it is a beautiful sky, but the blue on the top left draws my eye, and I think a 16:9 crop would make it stronger.
Cheers. |
May 18th |
| 49 |
May 24 |
Comment |
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May 18th |
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| 49 |
May 24 |
Comment |
G'day Josh,
I think Alan and David have said it all ... an image that is special for you and that is what photography is all about.
I would be very happy with myself if I could get a happy, natural shot of my friends like this. Well done.
I also agree with their comments about the background however. I have had a play with the image in Lightroom, I hope you don't mind, and have not only adjusted levels, but done a tighter crop.
Cheers
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May 18th |
| 49 |
May 24 |
Comment |
Hi Craig,
I'm Ok with the background as I don't think it overly draws the eye ( well, mine at least ) but it adds to the effect with supporting colours and textures.
I think it is a strong image with a good story.
The only suggestion I could make is to SLIGHTLY bring out the lettering with a bit more depth and definition.
Cheers |
May 18th |
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