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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 17 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Now that the formal greetings are over, let's get down to what we do well - critique our images! I know the Faneuil Hall area very well and you captured the hustle and bustle that is a normal day there. I'm surprised you weren't stampeded in their quest for food. As for the image, I am in total agreement with the need for a crop. I attached my thinking of less on the sides and took a little off the top. Also, I pumped up the contrast to try to get away from the comics look. |
Sep 12th |
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| 17 |
Sep 20 |
Reply |
Ah, please sign off as either "Joe 2" or the "Other Joe!" Thanks. . . |
Sep 12th |
| 17 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
I want to welcome our newest member, Joe Norcott! Since I do know him from a local camera club, I'll refrain from any further comments - for now.
Looking forward to your input and imagery! |
Sep 11th |
| 17 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Tweaked up your clouds a bit. Any better? |
Sep 8th |
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| 17 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Glenn, please reread my previous reviews of your bird photography! I see nothing here that would alter my previous reactions to your amazing bird work! It's all here!!
You must be well out of wall hanging space by now! |
Sep 8th |
| 17 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Mixed feelings here, Sheldon. While I like to see the vendor and his cart, I felt the overall look was too busy. The brightly lit areas were competing for my attention with those basked in shadows. Then there's the added activity going on off to the left. I did a crop placing the vendor on the left, off-center. I tried to even out the dark and light areas |
Sep 8th |
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| 17 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
My first thought was a take-off on "Gulliver's Travels!" I like your thought process here - the experienced captain and a ship to command. Positioning him over the vessel allows him "command" of the ship and the waterway. I don't think the teddy bear and stool add to the story. I had to read your reasoning why it was there as it was not obvious in my looking at the image. I hope the Captain liked this. |
Sep 8th |
| 17 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
Brings back fond memories as I had timeshare in this area for many years! As a landscape, I enjoyed looking at the view. I don't think the horse adds anything to the overall pix. You have a strong foreground, a good middle area, and a very pleasing backdrop! My screen shows something going on with the tops of those middle ground trees. Did you try to selectively sharpen this part? |
Sep 8th |
| 17 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
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Sep 8th |
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| 17 |
Sep 20 |
Comment |
I like your thought process here, John. Capturing the activity from inside of the train is fun. Nice touch on showing us the equipment inside the cab on the lower bottom. I feel the framing of the rest of the window was a distraction for me - not sure why. Also, I probably would clone out the wiper blade and the other black item in the upper section. I had a few moments so I tried to eliminate part of the window frame and the wiper. A tighter crop got rid of the top item. Some contrast and structure and I got this. |
Sep 8th |
| 17 |
Sep 20 |
Reply |
Thanks for the review. It was a moment that my iPhone captured. |
Sep 7th |
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