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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Reply |
Randy, That's the pros and cons of digital prints. We have a lot of prints but can create various versions enhancing along the way. Interesting that you and Sabine did the same edit. |
Mar 21st |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
Jim, I don't mind at all. Appreciate your time in suggesting edits. They tone down the image quite a bit. I like it. Thanks again for your help. |
Mar 14th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
Randy, Appreciate your editing ideas. Sounds like the group consensus is to keep the moon. AI's in agreement with you in reducing the yellow cast in the building. Thanks for helping me save this image. I always liked this image but never tackled the edits. |
Mar 14th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Reply |
Randy, What we capture in images are so personal. What do you think of Sabine's crop of the foreground which enhances arcs of the mountains and trees?
As far as computer colors on monitors, I don't have an answer. I'm working on printing images that resemble my digital images. Check with your club members. There's always an expert. |
Mar 11th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
Sabine, A meteor in Germany...WOW. Now that's a unique perspective on the yellow street light. Appreciate your suggestions and the groups about straightening the building .
In answer to your question, AI suggested to reduce the yellow cast to the buildings natural color, fixing perspective and a few other things. I'll email you AI's advice. Also suggested creating a high contract black & white architectural shot that contains the moon. Thank you for accepting the challenge and working on the image. |
Mar 11th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Reply |
Linda, I am going to rework this image with your suggestions. They're in line with of the group. Also, AI suggested creating a high contract black & white architectural shot with the moon. Thank you. |
Mar 11th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
Linda, I see two men engrossed in conversation. Converting to monochrome highlights the man on the left hand on chin which seems like a pensive look while the other gentleman expresses concerns. Were the hands next to the man on left an intentional part of the story? If not I'd remove. I like the moodiness of the image which reminds me of film noir. |
Mar 11th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
Douglas, I also struggled with the building angle. Notice that the right bottom corner is distorted. Thanks for taking the time to edit. Sylvia's suggestion of replacing the moon may be the answer to your suggestion of latching on to something. |
Mar 7th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Reply |
Sylvia, Yep. That's a street lamp and tree branches. Interesting comment about the window lights. I'll give it another try with your suggestions. Thank you. |
Mar 7th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
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Mar 7th |
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| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
Randy, You picked the right time of day. The colors and textures guided me throughout the image. The light on the trees sparkle, then you see the mist and the gold textured mountain. I'd also suggest cropping the right side which brings more attention to the mist and image balance. I saturated the mountain colors a little.
There's an art to shooting waterfalls. Did you use a tripod or any bracketing? Great composition. |
Mar 7th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
Jim, Fall by the Lake looks like a watercolor painting. I like the airiness and lacy look of the leaves. I'd would also saturate the colors a bit more. Maybe experiment with lightening the trees a little so they blend.
Just for kicks create a juxtaposition photo which keeps the IT clown!
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Mar 7th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
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Mar 4th |
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| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
Sylvia, Sadness...Brings to mind a past era of familiar sales associates, great shopping and liveliness. Your new 28mm makes you feel like you are in the mall. It gives you a good all around view. I was drawn to the empty benches and dark windows which implies emptiness. I experimented with editing out the dark windows on the right but the black windows add to the bleakness of the mall. I would only suggest removing the silver railing in the foreground and straighten image. Love the emotion captured.
Here's my experiment with dark windows removed and a vignette .
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Mar 4th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
Douglas, The dog is adorable and stands out! The first thing I noticed was its eyes looking at me under all that y shiny fur. Everything in Furry Librarian is sharp. The texture of the twigs and the swirl of the tree bark lead me through the frame. The background shadows also add interest. I'm curious did you arrange the image items. It balances so well. Love the subject which is the dog's answer to our outside library stands on neighbor's lawns. |
Mar 4th |
| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
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Mar 3rd |
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| 9 |
Mar 26 |
Comment |
Sabine, Great period shot. I was drawn to the barrel organ player and the two front bikers. The buildings nicely frame the bikers with the middle building pointing to the front biker. The individual's clothes drew me into the image. I was especially curious about the organ player. The monochrome and thin white boarder enhances the vintage look. I also like the color version which shows clothing details. Sounds like a fun event.
I tried to draw more attention to the organ player and front bikers with a vignette.
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Mar 3rd |
13 comments - 4 replies for Group 9
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13 comments - 4 replies Total
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