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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 16 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I like water lilies. Composition is good to me, but vignette is to wide and to dark.
Oil paint effect seems strange to me. I would prefere just usual blurring some distant leaves. |
Oct 24th |
| 16 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I agree with others. Postprocessing of dark horses shall lighten them, not burn. It's seen on Mohanan's corrections. I alson don't see the reason for such loosing of sharpness with respech to original. |
Oct 24th |
| 16 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
Walter, flying birds are hard to capture. Also good cameras have troubles to get sharp image. Not just wings. With enlargement we see, that also head is not sharp enough. So I also suggest not so tight cropping.
Such symetrical image is only acceptable on the middle of image, not so right. I would also make landscape orientation of crop. |
Oct 24th |
| 16 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
Joan, it's really hard to beleive 1/3400 and F2,2 on iPhone. And good quality of photo.
Your bw conversion is perfect. You have got beautiful clouds.
The fence is disatraction for me. I would also cut just above it. And some clouds on the right. It would be good to straigten the left wall. |
Oct 24th |
| 16 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
Interesting boats in the forground and background. Oversaturated white sky on the left catches my attention. I would crop it out. I would crop also some water on the right, which doesn't add interest.
The sun reflection seems more a reflection of a light. I would at least decrease saturation and burn it. You can also burn the river on the right side not to be so bright.
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Oct 24th |
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