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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 60 |
Mar 23 |
Comment |
I really like the colors. A nice foreground ant background element. I might try a pano coming up from the bottom to those nice green bushes and down from the top just before the color. It would be all about cropping in on that triangle of orange light that is so nice. |
Mar 10th |
| 60 |
Mar 23 |
Comment |
I can definitely see the rust =) The overall shot has so many things to explore. What drew you to the culvert? The contrasty repeating lines in the lower right? the face the sun made in the upper left? All the texture along the bottom of the culvert? the interplay of the soil and the culvert? I guess I am not sure what you wanted me to focus on. But the elements are interesting and lighting is adding to them. the color is bold and the background controlled. |
Mar 10th |
| 60 |
Mar 23 |
Comment |
Texture is amazing here, I might want to sidelight a bit more to bring it out even more. The gun is a nice touch and more kid cowboy stuff would help a little. The background adds nicely. I struggle with still lifes as they frequently come out flat. The soft constant light renders a good realistic presentation but it doesn't add to the dementionality. It is a decision you as a maker get to make. Nice tones and solid image. |
Mar 10th |
| 60 |
Mar 23 |
Comment |
Nicely exposed image. I think you nailed the idea shoes. As a story I found it too much of a setup. The colors pop and the background moody. But I don't imagine having walked in those shoes. Perhaps a few footprints and the a turned shoe, or a pair of heels thrown in the snowbank would engage me and let me wonder more about the 'why are these shoes here' I could even embrace the shoes tight together placed like in a closet like someone would be back to pick them up any moment. |
Mar 10th |
| 60 |
Mar 23 |
Comment |
Love the ethereal feel of this image. I am sucked into the cascades draw me in and I begin imagining what it would be like to be in a water world. |
Mar 10th |
| 60 |
Mar 23 |
Comment |
I really enjoy the colors of your piece. The lighting is soft and it seems inviting. The text draws my eye to the right side and the bananas curve also brings me nicely to the tomato. |
Mar 10th |
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