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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 19 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Glad you like it |
Jun 29th |
| 19 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thank you |
Jun 29th |
| 19 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Mel, good composition,good exposure, good tonality, depth of field. It cant get any better than that. well done. I love it. |
Jun 29th |
| 19 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Jay, what a good street picture this is! If feels like you were walking , saw it, stopped and photographed. I wonder could you walk 2 yards more have the shark inside the frame in whole?
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Jun 29th |
| 19 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
This is a very good travel picture. My only comment is the edge of the building on the left side. My choice would be either to remove it completely or add it to the frame. |
Jun 29th |
| 19 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
The leading line of the fence is a nice feature and adds to the composition. The colors are vibrant and compelling. Nicely done
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Jun 29th |
| 19 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Very interesting composition and colors. Well done |
Jun 29th |
| 19 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Thanks. It is intended to see this picture in a context of 4 pictures where each has tree elements and Yosemite is the background. |
Jun 18th |
6 comments - 2 replies for Group 19
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| 36 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thank you G |
Jun 29th |
| 36 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thanks B. Feel free to reach out I will gladly give you all the POI spots and share my experience. abensenior75@gmail.com |
Jun 29th |
| 36 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thank you for the good thoughts. I will try to darken it a bit.
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Jun 29th |
| 36 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Im glad you like it.
On right hand side hole - you will find some details. In general - there is no light source / nor reflection coming out from there adding these artificially may seem odd.
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Jun 29th |
| 36 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thanks Grace.
Blueish reflected light can be created / recorded on the sensor as this is indeed a cooler light temperature environment.I do not see such tint on my screen. |
Jun 29th |
| 36 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
This is a very nice landscape photo. f16 or f22 may have kept the star like sun but without the flare to the left. As for the composition - The red spot is a major distraction. Consider Suggestion 2 of Grace.
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Jun 29th |
| 36 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Grace, The composition, colors, layers, sharpness are all spot on. The white sky without details are getting too much attention. I guess not too much to do about it.
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Jun 29th |
| 36 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Very much winter picture. The square crop fits the composition perfectly and allows the viewer to concentrate on the 3 planes and 3 colors. I would not increase the shadows The softness is a part of the snow and the winter. Very nicely done.
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Jun 29th |
| 36 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
I love it just the way it is. My only comment is to remove the spot in the clouds between the 2 canopies. If you want to give it a bit more punch increase the saturation of the green color. |
Jun 29th |
| 36 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
That's my kind of picture. I love it. I would not touch it a bit. Print it put it in a book. |
Jun 29th |
| 36 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thank you for the good thoughts.
Color deviation may occur as this is cold temperature reflective light in an uneven condition. As you mentioned this is too little to change the true natural settings. Honestly I do not see it. |
Jun 4th |
5 comments - 6 replies for Group 36
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| 83 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thank you |
Jun 29th |
| 83 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thank you |
Jun 29th |
| 83 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thank you |
Jun 29th |
| 83 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Hana,
As your previous work, this portrait is very compelling too. The sharpness in the eyes is very well done. My comment to you is - consider less edit on the skin and face. It gives the picture a bit of an artificial look as if it is a barbie doll.
I recommend you look at the work of Platon and Yusuf Karsh both Masters of portrait photography. As for the lens choice -Very wise. It is too often that photographers overlook micro lenses for portraits . Congratulations on this choice! Working with a D700 you may consider using the best ever portrait lens created- the 135mm F2 DC by Nikon. It has 2 separate and independent 9 blade apertures allowing you to control the depth of field and bokeh in front and behind the focal plane. It is truly amazing. I have one :) |
Jun 29th |
| 83 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Elise,
Wonderful picture and edit.
A few thoughts to you: As michael suggested there a bit more work to do on the composition. The blurred top left background is a distraction. Perhaps Darken it. Another option is as Michael suggested - concentrate and isolate. Third- change your angle of view - lower and closer.
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Jun 29th |
| 83 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Dale, This is wonderful micro photography capture.The sharpness, contrast, ligh, and composition !
To me the web is the subject and the plant below is a distraction. I would crop landscape, removing away the plant, ,leaving only the spiderweb.
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Jun 29th |
| 83 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Very nicely done. This is a great portrait. I recommend darken the line above her head. |
Jun 29th |
4 comments - 3 replies for Group 83
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15 comments - 11 replies Total
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