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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 19 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
Thank you |
Apr 26th |
| 19 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
Thank you |
Apr 26th |
| 19 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
what a great comment Norm!!!!
I can write you a 10p. essay about that. In essence 2 elements to consider:
1. The 85 mm is "cutting" the distance between the layers making it all look like one flat plane (the intent).
2. Wide angle will increase the barrel aberration looks which will give more attention to the mulions than the "tile pictures". My intention was the focus on color and different tiles on one big flat plane giving the depth of sense via reflections.
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Apr 26th |
| 19 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
Busy it is. Yet this is the purpose and causing the engagement. Thanks for the thoughts
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Apr 26th |
| 19 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
This is a great shot. Im guessing you took it from long distance and cropped it. Still In my view i would not change a thing. I love it.
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Apr 26th |
| 19 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
Hi Norm,
A very interesting subject. see my proposed crop without the bench |
Apr 26th |
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| 19 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
Hi,
Very good subject and very strong foreground.
to me the sky is over statureated. see proposed crop without the distractions on the left. |
Apr 26th |
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| 19 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
Still Nature. Very compelling. I like it. The texture and softness it tells of...
One thought - a bit brighter on the left. |
Apr 26th |
| 19 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
This is another piece in the series you posted previously. Still beautiful. :)
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Apr 26th |
| 19 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
Glad you like it |
Apr 18th |
6 comments - 4 replies for Group 19
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| 36 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
I guess this is the wood that grew in his backyard. :) |
Apr 26th |
| 36 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
Well it's tilted. You are absolutely correct. These are mud houses. |
Apr 26th |
| 36 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
Yep. Good catch. Indeed this is the only sign of life. |
Apr 26th |
| 36 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
Glad you like it. |
Apr 26th |
| 36 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
The low light and the reflection is making this picture standout. The car the electric pole and the water spill are major distractions. Try a different angle.
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Apr 26th |
| 36 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
Grace,
I like the farming of the flag on the left an the tree on the right. It locks in the subject. One thought for you: big shapes are getting more attention. And the cemetery is equal to the trees. This raises the question which is the subject and which is the background ?
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Apr 26th |
| 36 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
The picture is done right. Exposure, composition etc.
I have 2 thoughts:
1. The clarity / dehaze caused the snow to look black.
2. A vertical crop of one tree alone will give the same atmosphere. Yes a different picture but just a different view. |
Apr 26th |
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| 36 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
L,
three thoughts:
1. the podium and the legs are showing blurr.
2. The tree tops on the bottom right are suggesting a vertical crop to remove them.
3. The moulin line between the floors is inline with the head. Preferable above or under giving the head space. |
Apr 26th |
| 36 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
Very nice B. My only comment is the vinghetting is very strong.
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Apr 26th |
5 comments - 4 replies for Group 36
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| 83 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
This is the exact intent to strip down the forest to its basic elements and keep you engaged.
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Apr 26th |
| 83 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
Yep. Looking like into a fabric. The fabric of forest. Stripped from all layers and colors to the basic elements making the forest.
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Apr 26th |
| 83 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
More information such as ?
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Apr 26th |
| 83 |
Apr 25 |
Reply |
Glad you like it.
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Apr 26th |
| 83 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
Well done Clark. The layering, the light, the high contrast, the strong texture. It all works very well.
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Apr 26th |
| 83 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
I Like very much the tonality from black to white from left to middle. Very good portrait. Is it staged?
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Apr 26th |
| 83 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
Elisie,
Definitely an interesting subject. I recommend you the following exercise. Try photographing the subject from 4 different directions each picture once standing once from a lower angle. print them all out 4/6" put them on the table and choose one. Only one. Then reason what led you to choose that specific print. |
Apr 26th |
| 83 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
Hi Dale and nice to meet.
This is a good composition. The light is difficult. If you had the opportunity I would recommend returning to retake the photo when the light is more even. Another thought: big shapes get more attention. In your composition the forest and the river are equal. Is that the case ? |
Apr 26th |
| 83 |
Apr 25 |
Comment |
There is a good sense for forest. The tonality is very good. Composition - is more of a personal flavor. I like the Three vertical tree lines in the middle. |
Apr 11th |
5 comments - 4 replies for Group 83
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16 comments - 12 replies Total
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