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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 35 |
Nov 23 |
Comment |
Thank you all for your comments. |
Nov 19th |
| 35 |
Nov 23 |
Comment |
What a lovely find, but the composition lacks interest. I think you have lost the texture and contrast in your conversion. I would add texture to the buildings and brighten the white trees above the structure. If you add some light to the top edges of the building where there is grass or weeds growing, it might add some interest as well. The foreground would benefit from contrast as well. Since the composition is all about the structure, you could eliminate the sky as it does not give added value. |
Nov 19th |
| 35 |
Nov 23 |
Comment |
I like to switch images with reflections upside down as well. Often, it adds a bit of edginess. I would crop from the right side to limit the busyness of the composition. It would also bring the lovely curve of the branches on the left side-forward and lead one to the opening in the trees on the left. |
Nov 19th |
| 35 |
Nov 23 |
Comment |
I like the dreaminess of the photo. I would crop from the left side as it is too dark and does not add anything to the composition. The cropping would also take the tree away from the middle. That way your 'dreaminess' enhances the image and the darkness is not overwhelming. |
Nov 19th |
| 35 |
Nov 23 |
Comment |
I too am a fan of old barns. Your image is lovely. it could be cropped at the top above the clouds as there is too much negative space. It could also use some lightening and darkening within the grasses to add more contrast. I also would like to know your thoughts on IR in the iPhone. |
Nov 19th |
| 35 |
Nov 23 |
Comment |
Thank you, Lauren. I had debated with myself whether to leave it in or not. I can easily remove it. |
Nov 3rd |
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