|
| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 9 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
David-Perfect timing for this image and no harsh light at all. I do agree with Allen's suggestion to remove the distraction of two lights on the right side. I think there is room to crop about 1/2 inch from the top for better composition. Debbie's suggestion is still valid for straightening this horizon.
Shaikh Amin |
Nov 24th |
| 9 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
|
Nov 24th |
| 9 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
Priscilla- I think you picked the wrong day to photograph this steel structure. I would look for a clear day with a blue sky and shooting in the afternoon when the shadows falling on the steel and giving you a lot of options from a different angle to avoid bushes and trees. However, I like the composition with the blue sky behind with no distraction. Try again if you can and good luck.
Shaikh Amin |
Nov 24th |
| 9 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
Allen-Your model Jimmy looks great on pumpkin but I suggest to tone down pumpkin a little bit in order to keep your attention on Jimmy. I also see couple of white spots on right side of the door which need to be removed or cloned for better look.
Shaikh Amin |
Nov 24th |
| 9 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
John- You improved your image a lot by tight cropping, enhancing color saturation of rippling reflection and the sky.
It looks much better to me than the original image. What if you flip the image with the sky up and add birds to the sky. What it would look like? Try it if you feel like it.
Shaikh Amin
|
Nov 24th |
| 9 |
Nov 20 |
Comment |
Debbie-You are right! You did very well with your lily using your gadget like Topaz which I never used it. The main common interest lies in the yellow color of lily. However, I do agree with David's comments if given a touch of more contrast on shadows would improve the image better. Good job Debbie!
Shaikh Amin |
Nov 24th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 9
|
6 comments - 0 replies Total
|
