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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 99 |
Nov 22 |
Reply |
Thanks,Bev. |
Nov 21st |
| 99 |
Nov 22 |
Reply |
Thanks, Linda. I like what you did with the cropping, similar to Gerard's version which also shows the water.I was very focused on the figures when I cropped it and wanted them to be the whole picture. Now, I like inclusion of more of the environment because it tells more of a story. |
Nov 16th |
| 99 |
Nov 22 |
Reply |
Hi Gerard - You made a very interesting observation. I like what you did with the cropping and agree that providing more of the surroundings contributes to the narrative. I also like the greater feeling of motion that the parallel lines give. Great feedback! |
Nov 12th |
| 99 |
Nov 22 |
Reply |
Thank you, Michael. I like your edit. I've looked at this image so much that I think I "got used" to seeing it warts and all. What makes this excercise so valuable is the feedback from others who see it with fresh eyes. I will go back to the original and make a cleaner version. Thank you for your kind words. |
Nov 6th |
| 99 |
Nov 22 |
Reply |
Hi Peter - I found your comment about shooting subjects from behind interesting. I have a lot of "behind" images and find part of the challenge is getting details that convey information even when the face isn't visible. One of the things I like about this image is the father carrying his little boy's sand spade and bucket, so thanks for mentioning that. I think there is, in fact, too much "glow" around the man's legs which is an error I would certainly fix. I like what you did with removing the distracting stones near the top of the man's head. Thanks, Peter. |
Nov 6th |
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