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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 60 |
Jul 22 |
Reply |
I didn't understand that either. I think (hope) I got the point however. |
Jul 18th |
| 60 |
Jul 22 |
Reply |
I didn't understand that either. I think (hope) I got the point however. |
Jul 18th |
| 60 |
Jul 22 |
Reply |
I didn't understand that either. I think (hope) I got the point however. |
Jul 18th |
| 60 |
Jul 22 |
Comment |
Neat shot. I think that it really captures the splendor of the area and I especially like that poor little tree all alone on that island.
I would remove the trees on the lower right, as well as the beach. I think it pulls you away from the island, which is the subject (at least I think it's the subject).
I realize that some people don't like this, but could you increase the contrast in the sky? The clouds already reflect on the ice and I would make them look a little darker and more ominous. Make you feel even worse for the poor little tree.
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Jul 18th |
| 60 |
Jul 22 |
Comment |
Great shot. I am generally afraid of architectural photos and I think that this photo encourages me to give it a try. I think that the similar colors between the building and the sky really draw you in and I love the sharp angles.
I agree that there is a bit of noise, especially in the sky and I would probably remove it, but that is a personal preference. With that iso, you probably added the noise at some point of the processing (maybe by using the strong contrast in the tone curve section of LrC?)
I also would remove the tree and it I would love to see that horizontal zigzag line along the bottom stay in the frame the entire way across
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Jul 18th |
| 60 |
Jul 22 |
Comment |
Looks like an interesting place. I agree that the lighting is good. I probably would remove the tree at the upper right hand corner of the frame and clean up that border a little bit more.
I'm having trouble deciding if there is a plank sticking out of the front of the wagon, or that is a stone border for the garden. I would try this picture from a lower vantage point, which would likely separate these two elements. If it's part of the wagon, I would try to include the entire thing.
One idea might be to try this shot at a different height. I find that changing camera height often changes the entire composition. |
Jul 18th |
| 60 |
Jul 22 |
Comment |
Looks like an interesting place. I agree that the lighting is good. I probably would remove the tree at the upper right hand corner of the frame and clean up that border a little bit more.
I'm having trouble deciding if there is a plank sticking out of the front of the wagon, or that is a stone border for the garden. I would try this picture from a lower vantage point, which would likely separate these two elements. If it's part of the wagon, I would try to include the entire thing.
One idea might be to try this shot at a different height. I find that changing camera height often changes the entire composition. |
Jul 18th |
| 60 |
Jul 22 |
Comment |
Great shot. The focus on the bike/rider is perfect and the blur definitely gives the impression of movement. I also like how you left a little "space" on the right hand side for the motorcycle to have a place to travel. Here's a tiny issue...Would it have been possible to stand somewhere that made the entire background uniform? I realize that's a small issue. Overall, amazing shot |
Jul 18th |
| 60 |
Jul 22 |
Comment |
Very striking image. I really like the composition. I only wonder whether it would be more striking with either a more exposed background, or a totally black background. I would probably start with a black background, but that's my bias. |
Jul 18th |
| 60 |
Jul 22 |
Reply |
Thanks for the comment. You might be right. I will try to reframe the picture and see if that works better. |
Jul 18th |
| 60 |
Jul 22 |
Reply |
Thanks for the comments. I did remove the black graffiti and you're right, it looks better. I still think it might be a bit too busy. |
Jul 10th |
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6 comments - 5 replies for Group 60
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6 comments - 5 replies Total
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