Activity for User 160 - Al Swanson - akswan1969@comcast.net

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22 Oct 22 Comment Great storytelling and I love the expression on the woman's face. It's too bad that the images split by the contrasting light. Oct 10th
22 Oct 22 Comment A good composition. I would recommend however that you crop more off the left side to cut out those distracting electric wires in the upper left and take some of that railing away which to me doesn't do much for the photograph. Good contrast. Oct 10th
22 Oct 22 Comment I do agree that the building is still leaning and the white tower on top is very distracting. I would also recommend that you brighten the image a bit - - it just looks very dull and uninviting. Good perspective though Oct 10th
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65 Oct 22 Reply I didn't want a focus on any single plant but rather the aggregate. How plants provide beauty when combined. Oct 16th
65 Oct 22 Comment I like the final product and the way you altered the background. I'm not sure what your list of data elements in your explanation mean. Perhaps the date of narrative on how you created the final image would help me. Oct 10th
65 Oct 22 Comment Your final product is very pleasing to look at and has removed the sharpness of some of the lines of the original.The textures of your background are very complementary and you've created a first-class our quality image. What was your process in adding the texture? It worked! Oct 10th
65 Oct 22 Comment I really like the way the flower came out overall. The detail in the petals is outstanding. I noted a bit of blotchy spots in the background in the upper left-hand corner and it seems that there are glow shadows in a couple of areas around the flower where the background is lighter in contrast. Not sure if this was planned or not. Great job on reversing the image and Composition Oct 10th
65 Oct 22 Comment Fantastic job on this. I particularly like the very unique color of this flower. Super job on muting the background. Only suggestion would be to try and enhance the sharpness of the small petals on the lower side of the interior of the flower. They are a bit fuzzy. It appears that the focus is on the top part of the center core Oct 10th
65 Oct 22 Comment I really do like the way you finished this image off. Normally I would look at the background as very noisy because of the rough appearance, however, in this case I think that it works very well with the image particularly since it spread in several areas of the frame. Excellent job on detail in the petals. Worthy of a wall hanging Oct 10th
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