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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 47 |
Mar 25 |
Comment |
I like the tonal range, especially the whites in the buildings.
Maybe a little more opening of the shadows on the face of the cliff?
I like the arcing coastline, it provides some drama to the photo.
Sometimes it's hard to know whether to straighten an image or not; it may look awkward or it may work out -I guess you can play around with that part.
I too was imediately drawn to the dark shapes in the foreground and agree they could be lightened up or removed.
It's a very beautiful scene. |
Mar 14th |
| 47 |
Mar 25 |
Comment |
The depth of field is very effective with the water and the boat just slighlty out of focus as to not compete with the life preserver. I thought more water color than pencil drawing, especially in the ships and the water. The lines of the boardwalk/dock work perfectly to lead the eye into the image, and I really like the pattern on the wood just above the life preserver.
Lastly, I don't think the sky can be overlooked -it has an ominous feel but not enough to overpower.
Great shot.
Rob |
Mar 14th |
| 47 |
Mar 25 |
Reply |
Thanks Kirsti, Jeff and Barbara for your suggestions. I will use them to improve the image as best I can. Much appreciated.
Rob |
Mar 13th |
| 47 |
Mar 25 |
Reply |
Thanks Kirsti, Jeff and Barbara for your suggestions. I will use them to improve the image as best I can. Much appreciated.
Rob |
Mar 13th |
| 47 |
Mar 25 |
Reply |
Thanks Kirsti, Jeff and Barbara for your suggestions. I will use them to improve the image as best I can. Much appreciated.
Rob |
Mar 13th |
| 47 |
Mar 25 |
Comment |
Hi Kirsti,
I certainly love the creativity and originality of your photo - that's a great eye on your part to see a photo in that discarded device.
I really like the complimentary oval shape of the device itself, the cracks in the glass, and your outline. There is a great contrast between those harmonies and the tension the cracked glass represents.
I think you did a great job of redefining the background also. I can't suggest anything within the photo that could improve it.
Very interesting photo! |
Mar 10th |
| 47 |
Mar 25 |
Comment |
Hi Jeff,
Kirsti beat me to the Ansel Adams comparison. This is a spectacular shot rivaling any professional ones I have seen of the same location. I was there back in 2016 and struggled to get the lighting and location combination as you have successfully done here. There's nothing I can add that could possibly help to improve it.
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Mar 9th |
| 47 |
Mar 25 |
Comment |
Hi Kirsti,
Yes, I agree with the blur effect and had tried to do that but wasn't successful in isolating the area. I will try again. I hadn't thought about cloning the pole, I'll also give that a try.
Thanks for the helpful suggestions! |
Mar 9th |
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