Activity for User 1578 - Robert Cordivari - rcordivari@gmail.com

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10 Aug 22 Comment This is a wonderful seascape. I might crop off the top a bit and see what that produces. The image simultaneously conveys power and beauty. Aug 13th
10 Aug 22 Comment I like the composition of this photo with the blurred flowers in the background. A little more of the stem is a good suggestion too. Aug 13th
10 Aug 22 Comment The title says it all!
I really like how you've tapped into something unique. Do you know of others who practice the same technique?
Aug 13th
10 Aug 22 Comment I like the image - maybe tone down the reflections a bit. The overhead angle works for me because of the depth of the hood - it's not just a flat hood like modern cars. It's a minor distraction to me (and probably only me!) that the hood ornament tilted off to the left just slightly.
I too would like to see other shots you took that day.
Aug 13th
10 Aug 22 Comment I like the color adjustments you made - it is much more vibrant now. It feels unbalanced to me, but I've experienced the same situation where you can only get what the landscape offers you.
Maybe crop the top so that there are no breaks in the horizon. on the left half of the image?
Aug 13th
10 Aug 22 Comment It was just for fun. I only had two shots at the technique - I was on an island in the middle of the road waiting for a bus.
The photo has very much to do with Naples. If you've ever been there - practically everyone rides them - delivering pizzas, carrying babies, etc... It was a hoot watching them pass. I'll play around with the other suggestions.
Aug 13th

6 comments - 0 replies for Group 10

47 Aug 22 Comment If you work on the blacks in the town I hope it won't affect the white outlines of the houses in the lower right - they stand out nicely. I thought at first glance this photo might be from the early 1900s - it has an old time feel to it. I like the overall composition very much. Aug 14th
47 Aug 22 Comment I love how you can take a fixed assignment and produce such originality. The blue tint is perfect - at first I thought the pendant might be underwater. And I like how the chain leads the eye from the left into the photo. The background works better in the monochrome version. Aug 14th
47 Aug 22 Comment This image looks like the subject could have posed for you under professional lighting - it's a really wonderful image. The lighting and tones are really good and the intensity of the dancer is very evident. Aug 14th
47 Aug 22 Comment I like the overall composition, the rope/rigging lines create nice framing. And I like the serious look on the sailor's face - he's not taking his task for granted. The sepia tone works really well for this image. I think the photo works with or without the addition of the young lady but certainly it tells a stronger, different story with her in it. Aug 14th
47 Aug 22 Reply Thanks for the feedback. What I'm learning is that I have to think more when taking some photos to make sure they are conveying what I'm seeing. Aug 12th
47 Aug 22 Comment I was not certain how to crop this photo. One of the aspects I liked about it is that on the right side of the photo you have the welcoming arm that seems to invite people to sit in the chairs and on the left side you have the arm and the stairs that seem to be pointing one to exit. I was going to call this photo stay or leave!

Thanks for your suggestion.
Rob
Aug 10th

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