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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 31 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
Ella, I think the composition has some potential. I would ensure the foreground was in focus by moving the focus point back towards the camera. I feel allowing the background to fall out of focus works. Even though you seek a low key image, I feel you need to have a white point being some part of the music sheet or glass's frame. |
Aug 18th |
| 31 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
Susan, I like this different version of the much photographed Haystack Rock. They are some abnormality/distortion to the right side of the last rock on the right that would be better blended in. Your composition & technique help tell the story of this vast rock sticking out of the sea. |
Aug 18th |
| 31 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
Hello Ian, While I agree that f/8 or f/11 stop might have served you better, I think an elliptical layer to darken the overall image except for the swan might help as per the attached demonstration. |
Aug 18th |
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| 31 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
Peter, such an interesting and striking composition. The grass seems to be the leading line to the tree allowing the eye to move to the sky and mountains and then back to the barn. At first it was hard to determine the focal point in this busy composition. |
Aug 18th |
| 31 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
Hello John, A really interesting image. Since the left hand crop appears to not be able to be increased, I would suggest cropping down to the top of the central arch to simplify the image. In addition, I would suggest using HDR Shadow or detail extractoor in CEP to bring out more detail on the anchor. |
Aug 18th |
| 31 |
Aug 23 |
Reply |
Thank you Ella, I did work harder on this one as Peter has set a high standard for Iceland |
Aug 14th |
| 31 |
Aug 23 |
Reply |
Thank you Ella, I did work harder on this one as Peter has set a high standard for Iceland |
Aug 12th |
| 31 |
Aug 23 |
Reply |
Thank you Ella, I did work harder on this one as Peter has set a high standard for Iceland |
Aug 12th |
| 31 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
Peter , your capture is wonderful & provides further perspective on this great spot |
Aug 12th |
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6 comments - 3 replies Total
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