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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 31 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
John, I do not want to echo the previous comments you have already acknowledged. Since you are considering reshooting it may I suggest you coinsider a portrait mode from more to the right to create a diagonal line to gone the building a 3D. I would believe that a low sun light form the right would enhance the texture of the building too. |
Dec 18th |
| 31 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
Ella, I loved the story behind this image and I am glad you shared it. As a photo, I see it as a picture of some one else's art as opposed to your own creativity. As a suggestion, I placed an elliptical layer and a small vignette to try to give it some atmosphere. It is a lovely figure and I am sure your creativity can bring it to life! |
Dec 18th |
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| 31 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
Susan, A very well composed and presented image. Your tonal range is perfect and renders so much detail and information. I might suggest placing a layer on the sky and seeing if the noise could be reduced. |
Dec 18th |
| 31 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
Ed ...This is photographed well and your processing of the hub caps is excellent. The use of those bricks to keep them in place is interesting and I might suggest it would enhance this already good image further if you worked the detail to make them stand out as a counter point to all that chrome. |
Dec 18th |
| 31 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
Ian, very interesting and creative. I would echo the comments about the face as being a change that would greatly enhance the story. I might also very slightly darken the tombstone top side as the strength of the light on it draws my eye away from the actor. |
Dec 18th |
| 31 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
Peter, I share your like for Vestrahorn and have enjoyed your many versions. However, this might be your best yet and the composite is excellently done. I particularly admire the overall composition and the placement of the aurora. May I suggest for your consideration that an adjustment to the B&W levels/curves could add some sparkle to the left side of the image which seems a little flat to me. |
Dec 18th |
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| 31 |
Dec 22 |
Comment |
Jack thank you for dropping in and your comments. I did consider the lamp post question but it actually helps balance the top half of the image. I really appreciated your comments that the style gave you room to search and be entertained by the quirky bits.....mission accomplished ! |
Dec 4th |
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