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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 85 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Nice job on the post. All the shapes and colors are great.
Compositionally I think it could have used a little more room, i.e., cropped in less.
The lone child on the right is great although probably too close the edge. Why isn't he/she wearing a bright red jacket? |
Aug 10th |
| 85 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
I'm ok with your composition. I see you exactly centered the lighthouse and it had nice sidelight!
Nice job on the post.
Maybe just the lighthouse without the city and sky, especially with all the haze, is enough??? |
Aug 10th |
| 85 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Nice job on the processing and pulling color and contrast out of the original. I would experiment with adding even more contrast to the land to try and get more shadows. And possibly tinting just the sky with a little magenta
As Drema says, coaxing out a leading line in some way would have been good. |
Aug 10th |
| 85 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Did you fly your drone through one of the arches? :-)
A person on the bridge would have helped tis image a lot, even if it was you (if that is allowed)
The blacks seem a little blocked out
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Aug 10th |
| 85 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Pretty good stuff!
I'm ok with the cans and trash. But I might have flown more to the left so the cars are not so impinged on each other. And I'm not sure you need anything but the cars and a few people. The cars area very strong subject, so maybe a little higher aiming down. |
Aug 10th |
| 85 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Tagging onto Drema's comments I might have gone for just the windmills and the beautiful, ominous sky (unless they were too far away to fly the drone closer). In general there is too much "stuff" in the image. With the great light i think the windmills by themselves would have made a strong subject |
Aug 10th |
| 85 |
Aug 25 |
Comment |
Nice, pleasing image and light!
Compositionally a few observations. I agree with Drema -- the sky feels tight. The lighthouse (the main subject) is almost centered, but not quite, which is usually not ideal. If you had positioned the drone more on the left (or right) the lighthouse would have been side lit (vs mostly front lit), which would have added depth. And if the drone was closer the light house would have been a more definitive subject. |
Aug 10th |
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