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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Good luck with finding clouds! |
Jun 12th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thanks Darcy, if you get a chance, let me know if the edit I added looks better or if you feel is still needs to be a bit darker |
Jun 11th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Good luck with finding clouds! |
Jun 11th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
I really like the dappling on the right hand side on the mountains. I like how the poplars lead my eye to them, I think I'd try brighting them up a tiny bit otherwise make them a bit more of the focal point.
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Jun 8th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Hi Jay,
Did you focus stack this as well? Impressed with the DOF on this from the fern to the background.
Nice job highlighting the primary fern in the foreground. IMO, I think that the top of the clouds may be a tad too bright and are fighting with the highlighted fern. |
Jun 8th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
I like the low clouds and fog in this image and I'm sure you were glad you turned around!
I see you show it at 400 and think that if you have an image a tad wider, I'd like to see that. I like the rocks on the bottom right and am wanting to see a bit more of the water around them and in the foreground, Just a tiny bit there and in the top left I think would help frame this a bit better IMO. |
Jun 8th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Tom, I like how you used the greens at the bottom of the frame, but am wanting to see a tad bit more, especially on the right side.
The composition of the bridge to bring my eye back toward the city is nice and I like the warmth on the left leading to the cooler colors on the right.
Great job on the focusing throughout the image.
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Jun 7th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thanks for the suggestion on the edit, added it below! |
Jun 7th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
added an edit, let me know your thoughts on the contrast. Thanks Jay! |
Jun 7th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Jay and Francois, here is the edit with your feedback. Let me know your thoughts. |
Jun 7th |
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| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thanks Jay. Let me try your suggestion!
I still need to get to Francois feedback as well, so will do them both at the same time. Darn work has got in the way of fun :D |
Jun 6th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
If you're going back out, try different perspectives as well, from high, low, perhaps getting further back and compressing the scene with a longer focal length, getting really close and perhaps a closeup? Good luck and if I think of something else, will add it here! |
Jun 6th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Hi Ed, first , good for you for taking this journey! Congrats!
Onto the images. On first glance,I think it would be helpful to highlight the driftwood a bit more, perhaps with a vignette, or lightening up the center a bit? It's hard to see the details in the smaller images, so you might have done this already, but I'd try to sharpen the driftwood as well with a bit more contrast. Some of these next to each other look flat. For ones with a horizon, check that they are level. I also think you can create more depth, with some linear grad at the bottom and maybe top of the images to highlight the driftwood.
I hope that is the type of feedback you were looking for! If not, please let me know!
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Jun 6th |
| 93 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thanks Francois, great feedback. Seeing it on the bigger screen that I'm looking at now, I can totally see what you mean. There's enough detail there, that I might be able to adjust the brightness. Will try and repost to this thread.
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Jun 2nd |
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