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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 33 |
Nov 21 |
Comment |
Compositionally you have ticked so many boxes. The leading line. Converging lines of the road and mountain just draw you through the image. I think you might be suffering a bit due to the abilities of the camera phone. ideally you would want to change the F2 to something more like F6.3 or F8. Which will bring the Shutterspeeds down, but that will give you more depth of field. But not sure if this is within the abilities of the phone camera |
Nov 4th |
| 33 |
Nov 21 |
Comment |
Hi Lin. I love this. It is a very daring composition but it is different and immediately draws ones attention. So I love it. The plane creates nice balance. I agree with Bobs ideas around lightning the dark shadow areas. |
Nov 4th |
| 33 |
Nov 21 |
Comment |
They often talk about catering the decisive moment. You have ticked the box perfectly. The breaking wave and waves around the boat creates nice balance. Well done |
Nov 4th |
| 33 |
Nov 21 |
Comment |
You have a very good historical image here. In general well captured. A could of small suggestion. Look carefully at the editing in the blue at the top right hand corner of the tower. It seems like there is some editing that went awry (white areas in blue). I would also suggest cloning out the tree that comes in over the blue in the top right. |
Nov 4th |
| 33 |
Nov 21 |
Comment |
I love the window into the landscape that you created here. I would agree to pull the highlights baca bit and I would say lift the yellow saturation a bit. The lovely hello trees comes over as a bit flat in colour. But still a very good image |
Nov 4th |
| 33 |
Nov 21 |
Comment |
Very nice texture in the rocks and the Shutterspeeds is good to give that bit of movement in the water. I would also say burn the details in on the rocks. Especially the one above the stream on the right edge. But lovely picture, and I know it is a favourite because its as after you could go out after lock down. I also have such favourite pics. Well done! |
Nov 4th |
| 33 |
Nov 21 |
Reply |
Thankyou for your comments. I actually like the unrealistic part which is probably due to the 141s exposure and the cloud movement. Incidentally there is very little photoshop work in here |
Nov 4th |
| 33 |
Nov 21 |
Reply |
Thank you for your kind comments |
Nov 4th |
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