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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 95 |
Sep 24 |
Reply |
yes I mentioned I let the yellow be less focused... to your comment about eye hitting it first.... maybe I could have rotated to put the yellow at top so it appear more distant and maybe eye would not go there as fast. I think I assume that the yellow is more naturally a pull.... so I was flipping the focus on the dark mid-center ... but it may not have worked yet. I stacked but was not having a good day with. my rail that is why the something was out of focus and it happen to be the yellow, and not extra time to play [still have get new rail]. |
Sep 22nd |
| 95 |
Sep 24 |
Comment |
I like the whole vintage effect. I see the yellow center of flower as in focus part. I assume the red petals and green stem are getting the texture experiment. keep on experiment, this is a good exercise. I love texture. |
Sep 22nd |
| 95 |
Sep 24 |
Comment |
lovely scene. red vs green and red vs yellow, very nice. butterfly is nice capture and centered. is stuart saying darkening would be like a black vingette? your background at top and right is a bit darker - so maybe stuart is thinking of an even vignette? I do see that the area behind the butterfly wing looks much brighter than the edges just mentioned so whether you want the background to have a constant tone or 2 tone light condition is the question. or lighten the top and right side . middle of the photo is very nice. |
Sep 22nd |
| 95 |
Sep 24 |
Comment |
I think the soft yellow background works. the left legs of spider and foremost head are in good focus - other parts a bit out but that is partly what macro does. off of other comments - if you crop the right in, then making the spider bigger is a plus and I like off center images, be interesting to see what it looks like with spider inching toward bottom - maybe it could make him look ready to jump off the photo. |
Sep 22nd |
| 95 |
Sep 24 |
Comment |
I quite like it. it does look more interesting as a head shot - ow yellow eye is a prominent point. the texture of the scales on body is nice. background color matches parts of the upper head. you happen to get the arm on diagonal which work nicely to break up the background and give the reptile a sense of movement - rather than the head just dangling in mid air. |
Sep 22nd |
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