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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 54 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Kirsti,
Thank you for your comment and suggestions. I agree with all of you, and I'll revisit the image to see what happens when I approach it in a simpler, more straightforward way.
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May 13th |
| 54 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Matt,
Thank you for your comment and suggestion. I agree with you that it's possible to create a strong narrative without the girl reading, and I'll definitely revisit the image and give it another try to see what might emerge without her inclusion. |
May 13th |
| 54 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Alan,
Thank you for your comment and suggestions. I can see that your cloned grass is more effective than what I did using the grass paintbrush. I also really like your version of the image,I agree with you that too many elements can distract the viewer's attention, and perhaps the story isn't coming through as clearly as it could.
I'll go back to the image and take another look at it with fresh eyes.
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May 13th |
| 54 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Brad,
Your image has a lot of potential. As you mentioned, it's a work in progress, and you can continue experimenting with it to create different atmospheres and finishes.
You've blended the elements really well, resulting in a strong visual impact. My only concern is the placement of the farmer,I find that she draws my eye out of the frame, and the corner where she's working acts like an arrow pointing outward.
I took the image into Photoshop and played around a bit, creating another version where I softened the trees using some motion blur and placed the woman on the opposite side. I hope you don't mind, I did it just to illustrate my point of view. |
May 13th |
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| 54 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Alan,
Your skill in mastering this kind of image always amazes me. I really like how the tones and textures work together to create a strong connection with the scene. The subtle details you've added, like the half-open door and the warm light at the end of the street, are just beautiful.
The inclusion of the swastika symbol on the wall elevates the narrative, adding depth to the story and evoking strong emotions in the viewer.
Regarding the cane, my suggestion would be to enhance its visibility slightly, perhaps by painting the line on a separate layer in Photoshop to make it a bit more noticeable at first glance. |
May 13th |
| 54 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Kirsti,
What a lovely tribute to remember those who one day sacrificed for their country by participating in war.
I really like the high-key treatment of the image, it suits the story you're trying to tell beautifully. The inclusion of the red flower complements it so well and adds emotional weight. I also agree with the other suggestions regarding the sand tracks and the intensity of the red in the flower.
If I were to be a bit picky, my only suggestion would be about the children's arms. The tonal difference between them feels a bit odd, and my eye is immediately drawn there, trying to understand why that contrast exists. |
May 13th |
| 54 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Matt,
You've done a great job putting everything together in this image. As an exercise in placement and blending, you've succeeded in creating a highly realistic scene with exquisite color transitions throughout. The dark sky provides a strong contrast to the light falling on the building, and the inclusion of the rainbow adds a lovely narrative element.
I agree with the idea of cloning out the small structures to the right of the building, my eye is drawn there due to the light and their placement near the thirds. I might also consider cloning out the light patch of grass on the right for the same reason.
As for the tree, I have mixed feelings. On one hand, I like how it frames the scene and gives the impression that I'm standing close by, looking at the house. On the other hand, as Alan mentioned, it draws a bit too much attention and stops my gaze there. My suggestion would be to try darkening it slightly to reduce its visual weight and see if that helps balance the composition.
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May 13th |
5 comments - 2 replies for Group 54
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| 65 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Barbara, thank you for your nice comment, I really appreciate it. |
May 13th |
| 65 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi David,
Thank you for your comment and suggestions. I was tempted to remove the yellow spot in the background, but in the end, I decided to leave it because I liked the beautiful contrast with the purples. However, I do see your point, by removing the yellowish bud would result in a cleaner image.
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May 13th |
| 65 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi David,
Lovely composition, and you've captured all the details in this tulip very well. Perhaps the lighting setup could be adjusted, as Dick suggested, a lateral light might enhance the textures even more. I also agree with the idea of slightly boosting the colours to make the image more vibrant.
That said, I really like the point of view you chose to photograph this beautiful tulip.
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May 13th |
| 65 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Barbara,
You did very well capturing this image in the studio. The lighting beautifully enhances the water droplets and the texture of the flower petals. The composition works nicely, forming a triangle and using a controlled depth of field that adds dimension to the scene.
However, the background color doesn't quite enhance the flowers as much as it could. I agree with the other members, that perhaps a different background color might make the flowers stand out even more.
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May 13th |
| 65 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Dick,
I really like the soft, dreamy feel of this image. The flower is beautifully complemented by the gentle greens, and the bokeh and translucent seed pouch are just stunning.
Great image!
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May 13th |
3 comments - 2 replies for Group 65
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| 72 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Adrian,
Thank you for your kind comment, I'm glad you liked it! This was a creative edit where I focused on enhancing the subject and its beautiful colours. Of course, it's not suitable for nature competitions.
I didn't use a mask to darken the background; instead, I adjusted the colours and midtones to achieve a more natural result. |
May 26th |
| 72 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Maria,
Thank you for your nice comment! I also love how the dragonfly stands out against the darkened background. |
May 13th |
| 72 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Karen,
Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm glad you liked the image! This kind of editing really helps create a stronger visual impact.
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May 13th |
| 72 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Bruce, Thank for your comment. I am glad that you like it. |
May 13th |
| 72 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Isaac,
We also call them Caballitos del diablo here in Spain, and I really enjoy their colours and graceful poses. I dream of capturing them early in the morning when they're covered in dew drops, but so far, I haven't had the luck!
Thank you for your comment and suggestion. In nature shots, I usually prefer not to alter the natural conditions, but sometimes, when it's not for a competition, I enjoy exploring a more artistic approach.
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May 13th |
| 72 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Richard,
Thank you very much for your kind comment. I'm glad you liked the image, and it's great to hear that you consider the editing an example to follow in your future work.
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May 13th |
| 72 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Isaac,
Lovely capture of this action moment with the Reddish Egret.
You've really conveyed the tension of the scene, with the bird fully focused on its catch, and you managed to capture all the details with great sharpness.
My only suggestion would be to consider cropping a bit from the top of the image to help draw even more attention to the action at the center of the frame. |
May 13th |
| 72 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Adrian,
What a wonderful behavior you've captured! Nesting season is such a great time to photograph birds, as each species has its own unique way of building nests, and they often use the most unexpected materials.
The bird's pose with the rope in its beak is fantastic. My only suggestion would be about the small areas of the rope that appear completely blown out. You might consider cloning nearby parts of the rope to bring back some detail in those bright spots. |
May 13th |
| 72 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Maria,
I recently visited my daughter in North Carolina and really enjoyed seeing these birds, as they aren't present in Spain. You captured a great moment with the earthworm-such a nice bit of action, and you managed to catch it in excellent detail.
The crop feels a bit too tight, which seems to affect the overall image quality. Topaz does a great job with noise reduction and sharpening, and if you have the chance to apply it selectively, you can avoid the over sharpening effect in areas that don't need it. |
May 13th |
| 72 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Richard,
The crop you chose for this image creates a strong impact, it really draws the viewer in. It powerfully conveys the tension and energy of the moment, and you've captured it with excellent sharpness and detail.
Exploring another crop that includes more of the environment could tell a different story, perhaps with less visual intensity, but offering more context about the Osprey and its surroundings.
I really enjoy watching Ospreys, they're such skilled fishers with beautiful plumage. Unfortunately, I don't have many opportunities to see them here in Spain, and I truly miss my walks along Long Reef in Sydney, where I could often find them fishing with ease. |
May 13th |
| 72 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Karen,
Welcome to the group!
You captured these two Whooping Cranes beautifully, right at the perfect moment when they shared the same pose and had great separation between them. I really like this shot!
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May 13th |
| 72 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Bruce,
Great action capture of this Reddish Egret! I'm sure you had a wonderful time there, enjoying these amazing birds. Since arriving in Spain, I haven't had many opportunities to do bird photography, and I really miss those moments spent observing and capturing beautiful shorebirds.
The detail and lighting in your image are beautiful. I would just suggest removing the dust spots, as they slightly detract from the overall quality of the image.
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May 13th |
6 comments - 6 replies for Group 72
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| 91 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Adrian,
Thank you for the warm welcome, it's lovely to find you here too! I was previously part of the 46 Bird group, but something happened, and I ended up migrating to this wonderful group.
I slightly underexpose this shot to avoid blowing out the white feathers, which also helps enhance the dramatic lighting on the storks.
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May 26th |
| 91 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Sanat, thank you for your welcome, and thanks for your nice comment and suggestion. I will definitely give it a try! |
May 26th |
| 91 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Steve,
Thank you for your comment and warm welcome! I didn't use spot metering for this image, I simply underexposed it slightly to preserve the whites and avoid blowing them out. The background is a mass of trees, and by underexposing, it turned into a nice dark backdrop that frames the scene beautifully.
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May 26th |
| 91 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Cindy,
Thank you for your kind comment and warm welcome to the group. I'm very happy to have the opportunity to enjoy your photos and learn from the other members here.
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May 26th |
| 91 |
May 25 |
Reply |
Hi Jerry,
Thank you for the warm welcome and your kind comment. I really appreciate it, it makes me feel like a part of the group!
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May 26th |
| 91 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Cindy,
You did a great job capturing this little fellow! The wing display is beautiful and really showcases the bird's features. I also like the detail of the cactus spines, which nicely places the bird in its natural environment.
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May 13th |
| 91 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Adrian,
I really love this shot, it has a strong storytelling impact and a beautiful visual presentation. I love these birds and would truly enjoy the opportunity to witness a moment like the one you've captured.
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May 13th |
| 91 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Steve, congratulations in capturing this elusive bird in your backyard. The detail is beautiful and the sharp eye add to the visual impact of the image. Nice presentation also. Maybe I suggest to correct a bit the white balance to make the image a bit warmer.
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May 13th |
| 91 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Sanat,
Lovely image, you've captured the Ibis flying by in sharp detail, and I especially like the glossy colours in its feathers.
I agree with Jerry that removing a bit of the empty space in the sky could help draw even more attention to the action and beauty of the bird.
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May 13th |
| 91 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Bruce,
Great image, you've captured it very well, showcasing all the beauty of this Cooper's Hawk. All the details work wonderfully in this photo.
I would love for one to visit my garden too!
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May 13th |
| 91 |
May 25 |
Comment |
Hi Jerry,
It is definitely an Egret, but I can't say exactly which species, as the ones I know in Australia usually have black legs.
I love the detail and the pose of this Egret, it beautifully showcases its elegance.
You've managed the light very well; it's always challenging not to blow out the white feathers on sunny days.
The square crop works well in this image. |
May 13th |
7 comments - 4 replies for Group 91
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21 comments - 14 replies Total
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